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@vinagirl

Hello! It’s nice to meet you! That’s so cool! The Septrum is a cool name!

Thanks!

it’s awesome that you love math! (Wish I could say the same thing lol 😅)

It’s not everyone’s thing, that’s totally fine, lol!

I depends on what book I’m working on for the soft and hard thing. Some I like to be very flexible with and some have to have so…

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@lydibug

Sorry, I’m going to have to not join after all. I need to focus more on my writing, and I’m already in quite a few RP’s. Though this is a really cool idea!!

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP to focus more on my writing. Just thought I’d let you know!

@vinagirl

Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, so this is sort of like a spiritual battle? Sef can defeat the Pythonos because she is willing to stand up to their lies. Lilitu is a Payne too, though, right? The reason Sef is the only one who can defeat them is because she has believed their lies and he hasn’t?

Essentially, yes, and…no. It’s hard to explain the thoughts i…[Read more]

@vinagirl

yeah it’s never boring around our house🤣

😄 I bet!

my favorite color is teal

oh!! that’s a pleasant color!

I have no idea how many characters I have. I’ve never counted 😂 I’d say somewhere around thirty to forty?

Oh awesome!!

First person (I walked) for sure.

Cool!!

Characters! I am SO BAD at world building! 🤣🤣

lol!

Forever and ever amen…

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whoops… I didn’t mean for mine to be so long…

@vinagirl

Greetings from Burne!

Hey there! I’m GRCR! I’m a fiction fantasy-ish writer, an avid artist, a journalist for my fictional newspaper, and a character lover that has over three hundred in my book cast (oh, and I love them so much that I wish they were real people, lol). I enjoy listening to music and imagining my characters singing the…[Read more]

I decided to try a wide board instead of a tall board…. so here that is…

The character is my beloved Brayden Gretchen (I know and I don’t care, so I’m using that girls name as a surname anyway). Brayden is one of Blaine Gretchen’s eight siblings. (I know you all don’t know who Blaine is yet… I think he’s the only MC in my story that I…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t have much to add, since I basically agree with Hybridlore and Jonas. Soo… yeah, other than the points mentioned, it looks good to me… 😄

@keilah-h

Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.

Yeah, essentially. Though N’nesha specifically hasn’t even seen that horizon, it’s probably been described to her before.

There’s a planet in Star Wars calle…

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@keilah-h

I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)

More or less. It’s not really an asteroid, but it is a field of planetoids. I’ve talked about Omialia many times before, but it’s essentially a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

N’nesha

Uvah had Bucky sit, working on his wound. I paced back and forth.

Neshe: We need to get out of here.

Nele: Where even is “here”?

I decided to explore the room, feeling around the walls. Wood touched my fingers, and specks of light shown through the cracks. A window.

Neshe: This could be a good…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Poor guy…. 🥺💛

I love the quote about trust…

@freedomwriter76

Thanks!! 😊

(ApPaReNtLy I’vE aLrEaDy SaId ThAt… So It DiDn’T sEnD… lol) 

@freedomwriter67

Here’s the last post, and I made sure there wasn’t any after that, it was around page 417:

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

I decided I needed to stop procrastinating and continue before I getting prodded again, sorry it’s a little short😅

N’nesha

“…Let me handle this.” I heard Bucky say. I lay, stunned……

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