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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Now that I’m going back to the beginning…
This is really hard XD
because I know you’re trying to go for the “chaos” vibes of a big family as they get ready for church and the party. You set up Hallie, Easton, and the parents pretty well, especially for the fast-paced scene, but the other siblings kind of disappear throughout the book.
Maybe…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
To be honest, I’m not really sure.
I might have to reread it a little more and let you know XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Lois
“I’m just… worried about my sister. A bit. You met her and her friend in the library. She…” Lois shook his head. “Never mind it. There’s not really anything I can do while in class anyway.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Yijun sounds like an interesting character. What kind of setting is he from? The word prince immediately makes me think medieval, but that might not be right.
(but that would be after he already got away, so does that still count as a response…? ah, questions questions)
I think of the secondary response as what they resort to if the first r…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.
I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I need assistance ✨✨ in the forum Characters 1 year ago
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic I need assistance ✨✨ in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Okay soooo
Yet again, my novel is under SERIOUS CONSTRUCTION
I almost gave up writing two months ago and decided that God was leading me back to the novel I fell in love with MANY years ago <3
I realized that the reason I stopped writing was because of my characters.
Marcurious, Livia, Aubrielle, and Calia made me so angry XD they felt so…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I LOVE LITTLE HALLIE
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME
Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
also mmm, I love cheesecake.
Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.
@loopylin @theducktator @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @keilah
Thanks everyone!
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
How’s everyone’s summer been going?
I’ve been really busy and tired but I plan on being more active and rejoining the role plays as soon as I start having more time.
Ya’ll been as busy as I have?
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Loopy replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year ago
I’m now realizing I have a different definition of fear responses than what’s usual. I think the question still works though.
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Loopy started the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year ago
This is just like a lot of other topics we’ve made, except in this one, I want you, the author, to answer the questions, not your characters. I tried to find a topic that was like this already but I couldn’t so I made this.
You may also post your own character questions for other people to answer.
Here’s my first question: What are your…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@rae that’s awesome you got to have fun with your friends! Happy birthday!
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@keilah-h I’m going to get so depressed if I try to answer that question lol
@whalekeeper :((((
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon
I was gonna update you last night, but I figured I’d wait and give you all the tea in one post.
Today we did it! We went out to all the little shops, and it was awesome! Four (three of which I wanted to look at sadly) were closed, but we still got to go to three…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
I had a consultation with my doctor yesterday since my bloodwork results finally came in. I have lymes AGAIN. It came as a little bit of a surprise, since I’ve not found many ticks on me this year, but ticks are sneaky things. *Sigh* so here I go, going on a month of antibiotics in SUMMER. Not looking forward to it, as I do rowing/crew, and I have…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yeah, I meant to update you, but obviously I didn’t. Sorry.
@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @ellette
I did decide on something that turned out to be completely different than my other plans. My family and I went to a zoo a couple weeks ago, on the way, we passed through an area that had tons of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
Can’t do two links in one post, so here’s the other one!
Using the Method 3 of this video is how I got the watercolor effect for Lady Wind.
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