Scoutillus Finch

@highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator @whoever-cares

Yeah, I’m bothering everyone again. I like the idea of this scene, but I feel like it has some major problems. I want to see if any of you notice it, since I’ve found more than once that I stress over things that others are like “…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

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@whalekeeper @theducktator @anyone

I drew myself eating a star because why not https://www.canva.com/design/DAGCDpnQfk8/BDVlwzKlV6V4965Qzr_gYQ/view?utm_content=DAGCDpnQfk8&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=editor

@loopylin @whalekeeper @rae @koshka @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

Ok, soooooo I’ve been trying to brainstorm for another novel idea of mine that I’ve had for a while and would like to hear some inputs/thoughts

So, thanks to my Mom’s creativity, I finally figured out why Erich, a side character (and…[Read more]

@theducktator

I kind of didn’t trust him. If he continued to be this kind I would come to love him though. I just have trust issues with nice characters. XD. They’re so often evil.

That cracked me up. Mostly from surprise. Mandin is nice like that all the time, with sparks of extreme loyalty readers see here and there at the right times. He als…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

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@whalekeeper @loopylin

Chase

Chase reached into his pocket and silently pulled out his phone that he had grabbed from the floor before the three of them left the scene. He held it where the girl could see it, before sliding it back into his pocket.

“We, we need to…” He pointed to the doorway. “T-teachers, sta, stew, stu-dents find us.”

@everyone

Thanks for answering my questions, it meant a lot.

And yes, it is a violin.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears for sure!

Good. I was worried it was kinda unclear.

A Violinnnnnnnnn (and I was over here excited, like: HEYYY, RIKER PLAYS VIOLIN!! XD)

No way! That’s amazing! Idk even how to react, that’s just SO GREAT! And I’m o…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yep, makes sense. One thing that threw me out a little was how Nahim stuttered a bit, and his shivery response. I haven’t seen much of this character but for some reason I picture him as the stoic, silent warrior type. The stuttering especially sounds like a younger man or boy – the type like in Way of Kings, with the boy who was dra…

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@whalekeeper @rae

oh yay, it’s time for Dante and the twins drama. I need to put their older versions in a rp at some point so I can actually write them as friends lol

Ellie

As soon as the three boys entered the room, Eddie’s face darkened.

“Dante.” She growled.

“Uh oh.” Ellie breathed.

Dante gave a crooked smile. “Hey, Eddie. Ellie. Glad t…[Read more]

this is the first fanfic I’ve done anything on in weeks XD

I have an idea that started today that’s living rent-free in my head…may never make it onto paper, but I’m just gonna rant about it here bc I want to XD

House of Heroes; led by Duke Nicholas Joseph Furion, a noble who seeks to bring peace to the land: white, blue, and yellow.

Holds the northern part of the land, the largest portion, full of…[Read more]

@rae Hiiiiiiiii!!!

First off, your descriptions are absolutely FABULOUS, girl!! Like, I can see this scene so much <3

and now for your questions…

1. Not at all! I think it’s a good length for a scene!
2. nope, I don’t think so!
3. Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears…

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@highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator @whoever-cares

Hey,I need help knowing if this scene feels forced or anything.

The context is that Mandin invited Nahim to a festival that Mandin’s family was having, and Nahim promised to finally tell Mandin his traumatic backstory.

Evening came,…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Yeah, I had to do this same thing last month… Poor Nahim was totally broken…

Anyways, what I personally did was not focus much on the physical, but went more for the thoughts and emotions of my MC. It was still awful, but not in a gruesome way.

I did mention the body language a couple times of the one being tortured, but…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yes, I’ve been thinking about that for the past couple months. For whatever reason, skinwalkers ad hydras have been popping into my head every time I think about it…

I’ll begin brainstorming but for now let us set up our characters. Idk, maybe we make up someone who can get captured by a dragon and everyone goes to save them 🤷🏻‍♀️…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Silvanis

“Of course you’re a dragon! I’m not stupid, despite popular opinion. And no, no other dragons-” Silvanis stopped, looking around. “Well, minus the one outside. He doesn’t appear to have a rifle, but my vision can kinda get blurry through walls so don’t trust me. Can’t tell his color but doesn’t appear to have a feminine build.…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @grcr thank y’all so much!! It means a lot to me that y’all would read the scene and offer some thoughts 💖💖💖