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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
It might be that you are so used to picturing Aaron’s personality, that your sub-conscience assumes Aaron is known, and thus forgets to describe him.
YES THAT’S WHAT I WAS WONDERING TOO OH MY GOODNESS! I also relate to that XD
The fiercely loyal bit is what I find unnatural. He only met Aaron a week ago, and up till t…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!
I have written 63 full length novels and countless short stories… so that’s saying a lot
HOW. LITERALLY HOW. I haven’t even written ONE full novel. I’ve onl…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic A New Beginning: A Marvel Fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freed_and_redemed
Yay! You’re finally doing this again!
I like it!
Sorry, I don’t have much else to say about it unless you want a dark rant about human reactions, emotions, and dodging techniques.
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
What is the point? What is the purpose? Why should I resist when one day I will give in anyway in the end? Does it even matter? I could end my suffering, stop this voice whispering inside my head, stop these cold sensations rippling down my spine, stop the pain. All I have to do is give in…
-Alpha rn
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
I’ll try to post my drawing tomorrow.
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freedom posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 Would y’all believe me if I told y’all Riker was going to be the villain in the original idea for Freedom’s Fire? 😂
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Honestly, I’m not totally shocked. I can see him turning into the type of villain Alpha actually is. Driven by fear and grief. Ofc, I’m pretty sure that’s not the type of villain you had in mind for him since most his grief comes from him being a man who cares, but if he were to turn villain…
Actually, that might be a great fanfic AU…
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WOW. Yeah I can see it…but it’s so weird to think about!!!
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freedom replied to the topic A New Beginning: A Marvel Fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae
5 months later, and I have 2 more chapters of this fanfic to share😅😂 With Broken Shackles being the priority, I haven’t worked on fanfics in a while, BUT with Broken Shackles currently pretty much on pause, working on this has also been fun.
So, I present Chapter 6 and 7 of this Fanfiction
c h a p t e r …[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h Totally understand. I am working on a fanfic rn though👀
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
This chat is so quiet😅💀
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
I’m not attacking Aaron, I promise! That probably won’t convince you, I know how it is with your baby characters…but just know I’m only trying to help XD I love him! I just think he has so much more potential and can be even better!!!
It’s not just him crying…it’s really knowing him and having an intimate emotional c…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Aww that sounds rough, but I’ll be praying!!!!!!! <3
That’s sooo great and awesome!
Happy for you! <3
@keilah and GRCR
Awww really?!?! That makes me so happy! I don’t feel like they’re that good…but thanks!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B7X_-GIL5hU&t=780s
Watch this video. It really helped me develop characters!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
I wouldn’t say bland . Bland is too extreme for Aaron.
I just can’t see much of his character right now.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
I will find a way…😎😜
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
heyyy girl! How are you doing?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 2 months ago
You don’t have to do a “ship”
UM YES HE DOES
jk jk lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 2 months ago
Aww tysm! As a new worldbuilder this means a lot 💕💕
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
You guys…I need to have “Does that make sense?” as my signature XD XD
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Alpha, I’m not sure who you are, but don’t.
Alpha Elqin Grath, created son of Grathmere. Lab Child. Man who rejected his assassin future under Grathmere, only to become one under the Realn to repay the debt to the nation Grathmere wishes to destroy.
His story is one of darkness, of sadness, of hidden emotions with literally explosive consequences. It’s not one people can really relate to,…[Read more]