SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@vinagirl

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

team libbie and albert here! oh its so good! Your writing style is so consistent and its got the perfect 1800s vibe.

Thanks! I went through a huge Laura Ingalls Wilder phase as a child, so it’s only natural that I write a story along the same…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awww, Erichhh! 😭

But he sounds like such a cool POV to write from. 👀

@mineralizedwritings

I always love reading your writing. 😊 I feel like writing in present tense in becoming more popular now, at least in ya fiction, and I really enjoy it. I tried it once for a short story and failed miserably. 😂 But I might try it in a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

Lukas ignored Fynn’s joking. What did he know? But Lukas couldn’t keep from silently laughing at himself. He was suddenly being so defensive. And he knew why… Because, well… he really did like Livia, a lot. Like… a lot.

He blushed at his own thoughts. Maybe this was just a temporary feeling. Maybe Liv didn’t fe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I love it. If that’s what God wants you to do, then go for it! I’m sure people will still love your book nonetheless. No book and perfect, and if I’m being completely honest here… sometimes hooks are overrated…. 👀😂

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, yeah I forgot about that! I’ll set a reminder for myself.

If anyone needs a reminder, we are planning to do it at 5 EST/4 CST/3MST/2 PST.

@savannah_grace2009

oh that’s funny lol XD XD XD

@savannah_grace2009

lol

I wrote a reminder and pinned it to my wall XD XD

@savannah_grace2009

I’m excited! I’ve been excited all week lol

@savannah_grace2009

THAT IS SO GOOD! You are doing an awesome job Sara! yes! do what God is telling you to. Thats the most important thing. It made me so happy when i found out her mom was having a baby! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @vinagirl

Okkkk this is one of my favorite scenes I’ve written thus far!

May 1887

I knew Albert would be coming home soon, at least, that had been his plan when he left a year ago. Not that I’d heard anything from him since he had gone. I didn’t know exactly when he was coming back, until one Sunday I saw him sit…[Read more]

@jonas @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

Nae

Nae saw Riker’s eye widen, either in fear or surprise. She grasped his hand tighter, hugging her body to his leg. Not out of fear, but for support. After a few seconds, she stepped away from Riker, and planted her feet apart with determination. Looking up at the older man with her innocent blue…[Read more]

@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

Not sure if it’s necessary, but I forgot tags on that RP.

@keilah-h

@whoever-made-up-Wyoh

your ghost is eating my ideas

@savannah_grace2009 Another victim of our Wyoh!

Don’t worry, you’re not alone, she’s been eating my notifs before I see them, eating Freedom’s posts and cursing Sara to spell tags wrong! 😆

She’s been very busy lately.

@savannah_grace2009

That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Thats totally ok, go with what God wants you to do! The second chapter eased you more into the action which is also a very good type of introduction😊

I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD

Dont worry, I do! Think of really popular books like Harry Potter,  J.K. Rowling didn’t jump right…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, but they probably would have called it courting back then. That’s why Libbie was so upset with Etta to start off with, because Etta started seeing Chester without telling her what was going on. And Etta had already known that Libbie had a crush on Chester.

@savannah_grace2009

Here ya go, while I’m here I might as well give you more.

As the winter thawed into spring, I knew it was time to make things right. I crossed the fields to the Cullivers’ house, and as I approached, I saw Etta’s petite figure working in the garden. She didn’t hear me coming until I was about ten feet away.

“Good day, Et…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

No problem!

And don’t worry about if people like the intro! If God is telling you how it should be, He’ll give you the readers and all too!! 🙂☺️

@savannah_grace2009

Sounds good! The second was good too!! It’s always better to listen to what God tells you over all other advice!! 😊