SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @rae @anyone-else-idk-XD

Pics are finally working!

M’kay, so I’ve already introduced these charries before, but at the time, pics weren’t working. Sooo… now it’s time to share their moodboards!!

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning.

What??? I’ve always found it funny when characters do that. Especially in movies. I guess it’s different there since you’re seeing it, but I don’t think it’s be that bad in a book.

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @scoutfinch180 @whoever-else

Meet the friend-turned-traitor from my WIP!

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

He dropped his gaze to the floor and didn’t speak for a moment. “I’m not offended… I just…” He sighed, tossing his bangs out of his eyes with a flip of his head. “I guess I am a little… self-centered, am I?” He gave a quick chuckle. “I just don’t want to… to lose her…” he softly said the last part, but pasted on a smile…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Okay! Yeah, I get that and I’ve been trying to work on that.

Awesome!

Okay so question-I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning. So should I change how I start the story? I’d still have the same scene where Neveah tells Sef that sh…

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@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium @anyone

Not that this RP is moving very much at all right now… but I’m just giving you a heads-up that I won’t be on KP much, if at all, this week. I’m taking a break from electronics, but I’ll be back on Sunday or Monday next week.

@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 yes we should!

also, since you were probably reading the previous roleplays (if you can call them that), I assume you’ve been properly introduced to Crosshair and Feather?

AKA probably my favorite ship in my fanfics because they’re effectively opposites, but perfect for each other somehow, and their story is JUST SO…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Okay okay *sighs* ❤️

@savannah_grace2009

Oh my goodness congratulations, Sara!! Great job getting published!! That’s so exciting!!

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I’m gonna go read it now.

@savannah_grace2009

Woohoo!!!! Great job getting it publsihed!! I just read it 😭 😍 (and commented) Its so good, but so sad.

@savannah_grace2009

I haven’t read it yet, but I’ll probably get to it sometime today!

@savannah_grace2009

Let’s gooooo!!!!! Congratulations!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Hey Sara, is that your story that KP just posted?

@savannah_grace2009

Coming back late to this 😅

Right now I’m just barely holding all my emotions together with my WIP…I am really really unhappy with it…(I just had someone critique me already recently…and it never gets easier dealing with it!!! WHY DO I HAVE TO BE SO EMOTIONAL?!?!) I feel so immature and “weak” getting sad about every littl…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ummmmm……that’s like one of my nightmares…like my biggest fear is evil scientists experimenting on me!!!! (I know, I read too much lol)

I both read and play to many video games…. One of my biggest fear (From video games and reading is…. Puppets XD *shudders*

Thanks for the suggestion, Ill add that idea to the list!

@jonas

Oh, I guess I misunderstood your question because thats exactly what happens, it overloads the power stations and destroy it that way. 🙂

@loopylin @rae

I like those, thanks!!

@freedomwriter76

Behind the moonlit walls…. I like that… 😀

@highscribeofaetherium @grcr

Thats ok, I’m still thinking of a name after 2 years…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled awkwardly, the warmth on his cheeks feeling out of place. He willed it away and looked up at Liv. “I guess I just don’t understand how Callie’s mind works all the time. How do I know what I say will make her happy or… unhappy?” He caught Callie’s gaze as they passed each other again and she gave him a warm…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks. 😊