SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @rae

Do any of you care about your characters finishing their conversations? If not, @rae can transition us to bedtime whenever. If you do, we can wait till the conversations are over.

@grcr @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76

Meanwhile, inside the house… Sara, I hope I’m not butchering your characters too badly. I don’t remember if they were officially brought into the party yet or not but let’s just say they are.

Liliana

Liliana was happy to see some girls her age at the party. Most of the other young women were…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you! That’s just what I needed, lol

You and Jonas and HighScribe have been so helpful in my writing journey! I owe you guys one, lol

(If I get it published, I’m sending you guys signed copies!)

I’m glad we could offer some support! I look forward to someday holding a copy!

I’m thinking of doing something drast…

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@savannah_grace2009

I second everything Jonas said.

@savannah_grace2009

That could actually work really well. It might be a good way to start out at least. After writing them, you could sprinkle the POVs together if you wanted to.

Not to keep bringing this topic up, but that’s how Brandon Sanderson writes the Stormlight Archive: he writes each character’s POVs as a full novel and then mixes the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @freedomwriter76 @everyone

Hey all! If anyone needs/wants help with moodboards or something like that, I’m happy to make one for one of your characters!

I know most people on here actually enjoy making them, but it could be interesting to see someone else’s ideas for one of your characters… Just throwing it…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 nice to meet you and welcome to the forum! ^^

i do! i am a cellist 😊 what about you? <3

i have, but i can’t remember it, big sadddd haha it was when i was two years old

how long have you been writing for?

@rae

that’s amazing! stories inspired by characters are always great! i have several like that myself, i get where…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

If you want to quit the conversation with Ottoline and Nahim, ignore this post…

Nahim

Nahim lowered his gun and holstered it. He turned to Ottoline.

“As I was saying before, how well can you use your weapon? An d are you willing to word alongside us in getting home?”

@rae

I’ll look at it closer later, but the drawing of Nahim, LOOKS LIKE NAHIM! Down to the hair length!

😊 Well thats good!!

The only thing I can see wrong with it is my own silly fault. Nahim has a scar going into his hair on the right side of his forehead. That’s my fault not yours, otherwise, I see my belovéd Nahim! Exce…

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@savannah_grace2009

I think Nahim was talking to her.

Here’s the final dragon assignments:
@jonas: tundra/ice
@esther-c: desert/sand
@grcr: swamp/gas
@savannah_grace2009: mountain/storm
@rae: volcano/fire
@highscribeofaetherium: sky/wind, ocean/water, or cavern/earth (pick one)
@keilah-h: jungle or one of the two @highscribe doesn’t pick.

Sound good?

@savannah_grace2009

I’m sorry you’re dealing with that right now. As for what your mentor has said, I don’t agree with all of what he said, but I don’t disagree either. He could have been a little kinder, and perhaps given more positive feedback and advice along with what he said, but he did make some good pointers. Some of the things he pointed…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

The reason I had her be abused is to  show that God (or in this case, the Great One) can heal broken hearts and he has perfect love. This can still happen if her main conflict is missing her father. This would present the message that a father figure is important for every child to have. That way she still has a little…

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@savannah_grace2009

I pretty much agree with what Jonas said. And I would also say to just take a break. Do something else, get your mind off it, and don’t let it drag you down. And pray about it. That’s the best thing you can possibly do right now.

@savannah_grace2009

XD

@savannah_grace2009

Hmmm… I see what you mean. If I’m understanding correctly, the issue is that all of the characters are in super hard and depressing situations? My immediate thought is to just have at least one character who isn’t. Now that I think about it, most stories I’ve read don’t have more than one character like that, because is is <…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think the only thing that’s happened is Hans is taking Anna out to the stables, and Constance (James’ girlfriend) showed up.

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll just put the memes here for you.