SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

I thought it was Cassian.

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WHO IS BELIEVER FOR????? I have a guess, but I MUST know!!!!!

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Oh yes, I do!! I’m not exactly sure how to find users on there to follow though… If you can, you should find me on there as Esther. My pfp is a husky with sunglasses. (Now I’m gonna have to go through and my all my book playlists public. 😁 I think…)

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I have read everything you have in the link you posted on your profile. (Up to Chapter 16. Double checking, that is everything you have posted so far, right?)

I was a bit confused at the beginning. Until Sef’s Mani became pregnant, I could not figure out the story’s plot. I first thought this story would be all about Lilitu…[Read more]

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ACK!!! I haven’t got Spotifi so it won’t let me listen! *sobbing*

I’ll have to go through and look up each song. Which song is for what btw?

OK, the first one has to be lilitiu

@savannah_grace2009

Ahh!! That’s awesome! 😆

One of my playlists is over 24 hours long… 🫣 But that’s because it’s all of my Christian music in one playlist XD

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Yeah, like, I have a playlist for my WIP or at least the MCs, but I’ve never done specific songs like this before! It’s a really cool idea!!

Totally!!

Okay!

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Oooh, I love it!! It looks awesome!!

I am totally going to do this for my WIP now 😎 Thanks for the idea 🤪

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Ok, here is the next part!

“Aaron, Aaron wake up!”

Aaron opened his eyes and blinked in the sunlight. Turin was standing by his bed. Aaron sat up in confusion. He couldn’t remember having gone to bed. “Where are we?”

“In the tavern. You fell asleep yesterday afternoon. It’s now nearly supper…

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Ok, here is Turin. I am seriously cringing right now. Ugh. I HAVE to redo him.

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so sorry, I had to find her.

This is from three years ago, so it’s not very good. i should really redo her.

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Huh? I’m confused. They’re moving a second time. They never moved the first time, because they already lived in Wrallethom Heights before the Pythonos made everyone else move there too. So this is the first time Sef has ever moved.

Oh, they didn’t?

They don’t want to take Hanna specifically. Sef knows that if the greedy neighb…

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Anyone, (specifically Sara because this is her favorite.) Want to see a drawing of Sabina?

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Okay, critique time! Starting in chapter 14.

I take it this chapter is before some of the ones you already wrote, since it shows them preparing to leave the house? Or are they moving a second time?

Sef knew she was only moving a few blocks to the east, away from the border where crime was high and the Pythonos frequented…

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Ohh okay okay okay…

Just take a second to relax, cuddle up in the blankets or something (I’m messaging in bed XD), and remember you are not the problem. You are not the problem for being indecisive. Of course you are going to second-guess this – I know I would – because it’s hard to picture which future is better for you in…[Read more]

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Heeeyy thank you! And yes, visuals are sooo helpful!! I really recommend color coding. It can be overwhelming at times, but it feels like a huge step up from containing everything in your head.

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I’m so confused now.😂

Naturally Eloy is angry at his brother for everything he did, so he builds up anger, and then instead of stepping in front of Cass to die in his place, he HESITATES. So the opportunity is lost and Cass dies, when Eloy could have saved him.

So now Eloy has to live with the guilt that he should have and…

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You’re doing great Sara 🥰 You are brave to try counseling even though it sounds potentially scary and sensitive.

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I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this…[Read more]

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Oh wow, a lot happened, and I’m overwhelmed just reading this conversation 😅 I can’t address everything y’all and Sara said, but I have a few small thoughts.

About the Pythonos’ redeemability:

I didn’t mean to imply that they can’t be saved! I just meant that they wouldn’t have any draw to be saved, so they can never be sa…

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