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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Oh, yeah I forgot about that! I’ll set a reminder for myself.
If anyone needs a reminder, we are planning to do it at 5 EST/4 CST/3MST/2 PST.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
oh that’s funny lol XD XD XD
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I’m excited! I’ve been excited all week lol
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Raegan Aubrey replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
THAT IS SO GOOD! You are doing an awesome job Sara! yes! do what God is telling you to. Thats the most important thing. It made me so happy when i found out her mom was having a baby! XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @vinagirl
Okkkk this is one of my favorite scenes I’ve written thus far!
May 1887
I knew Albert would be coming home soon, at least, that had been his plan when he left a year ago. Not that I’d heard anything from him since he had gone. I didn’t know exactly when he was coming back, until one Sunday I saw him sit…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@jonas @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Nae
Nae saw Riker’s eye widen, either in fear or surprise. She grasped his hand tighter, hugging her body to his leg. Not out of fear, but for support. After a few seconds, she stepped away from Riker, and planted her feet apart with determination. Looking up at the older man with her innocent blue…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Not sure if it’s necessary, but I forgot tags on that RP.
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Allison posted a new activity comment 2 years, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
That will be fun! Hopefully your Moms back gets better. Back injuries are rough! I guess now I’m not going? Plans changed again XD. We were going to go to D.C, but my parents didnt want to drive in the Christmas traffic. Oh well, there will always be another time!
And I know, learning is so… enlightening. My brother thinks…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@whoever-made-up-Wyoh
your ghost is eating my ideas
@savannah_grace2009 Another victim of our Wyoh!
Don’t worry, you’re not alone, she’s been eating my notifs before I see them, eating Freedom’s posts and cursing Sara to spell tags wrong! 😆
She’s been very busy lately.
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Thats totally ok, go with what God wants you to do! The second chapter eased you more into the action which is also a very good type of introduction😊
I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD
Dont worry, I do! Think of really popular books like Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling didn’t jump right…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Yes, but they probably would have called it courting back then. That’s why Libbie was so upset with Etta to start off with, because Etta started seeing Chester without telling her what was going on. And Etta had already known that Libbie had a crush on Chester.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Here ya go, while I’m here I might as well give you more.
As the winter thawed into spring, I knew it was time to make things right. I crossed the fields to the Cullivers’ house, and as I approached, I saw Etta’s petite figure working in the garden. She didn’t hear me coming until I was about ten feet away.
“Good day, Et…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
No problem!
And don’t worry about if people like the intro! If God is telling you how it should be, He’ll give you the readers and all too!! 🙂☺️
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Sounds good! The second was good too!! It’s always better to listen to what God tells you over all other advice!! 😊
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
LOLLLL now it’s my turn to mispell your tag
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Ahhh I want to tell you what I had planned but I don’t want to give spoilersssss!
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂
You do whatever you want, girl, it’s your story. XD
I had actually never heard that before, but it kind of makes sense. I think some writers also use prologues for info-dumping. I’d rather have…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Ok so in this RP I say Liv has blue eyes, but correct me if I’m wrong. 😂
Lukas
Lukas found he couldn’t take his eyes off Liv’s face. He tried, but somehow, he found himself drowning in the crystalline pool of her blue eyes.
“Aww.” He heard a whisper pass by him. He blinked and looked behind him, only to see Fynn dance awa…[Read more]
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@acancello
Oh no!! I’m sorry, DC sounds amazing, so sorry you guys don’t get to go 🙁 I kinda hope we can still go to Havre because that’s where my grandparents live, so it’s really nice to get to see them.
I would bring my books to work on at night…but I go to public school for almost 9 hours a day, so by the time I get home, the last thing I…[Read more]