SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

He laughed. “You got it! What we were doing didn’t make him happy. Him, as in the Reprimor of the people. There’s not much to the government besides him and his soldiers. But we’ve made it so far. We might be fugitives of the law but… who’s really keeping track?” He flashed her a playful smile, tilting his head.

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76

Wow, y’all, my charries have it made compared to y’all’s.

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😂😂 jkjk, they just have different struggles I guess. XDD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok XD

Actually, now that I think about it, I think I’d rather read it through Reedsy or another platform. Because the only Google account I could use to comment would have my last name with it, and I’m not comfortable sharing that. 😊 I’ll still tell you my thoughts, just through KP. 😉

@freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @acancello @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @anyone-else

Update: We talked to a doctor who said that I was definitely somewhat diabetic, so he upped the amount of a pill I was already taking and gave us some other instructions about what to avoid and what I need to do daily.  He’s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Aahhh your boards look amazing!!! I love them!

@savannah_grace2009

True. XD

@savannah_grace2009

I did read Marcurious’s intro, and it was pretty interesting!

I’ll check it out!

@hybridlore

Ok awesome! I’ll be sure to tag you if I do. 🙃

@savannah_grace2009

Girl whyyy?? 😭

I love those characters SOOO much!!!!!! And their character arcs are amazing!

Tysm!! 😊 I’m so excited about their story, probably because it’s not going to be some crazy adventure. XD

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello

I wish I knew EVERYONE here in real life…it’s kind of sad that we’ll probably never meet each other in person *sad face*

KP Con anyone…? 👀

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn 

“From Aletheia. We used to live in the District of Daemarrel, but some things happen, and now… well we don’t exactly have a permanent home at the moment.” He hadn’t quite accepted that truth until he finally spoke the words. It was true. They had no permanent place to live. “But to be honest, I don’t mind that much. I l…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, cool chapter! Love it!! And of course, love Marcurious. 😁

You wanted to critique my writing too, I think? If you want you can use the same link, or I can make you a new doc. Whichever you prefer (:

This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our s…[Read more]

@jonas

Yes, I think Riina would love to see Jr humiliated, and Nat would help her out! XD

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, he’s eighteen in this AU.

@highscribeofaetherium @sara too

Thank you for the offers! I just first would like to see what Riina does if you don’t mind.

@savannah_grace2009

I didn’t reply earlier, but I am praying.

@savannah_grace2009

Just so you know, it seems that you have that google doc set up as view only. It would probably be more useful if you had it so that we can make comments, but that’s up to you.

@savannah_grace2009

Ah, I see. 😄 lol

@savannah_grace2009

Interesting chapter!! I like it!

oh, and I really loved this:

“Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t kill you right now,” the Pythonos pressed the bloody knife to Marcurious’ throat.

Marcurious coughed. “Because I am just so amazing,” he flashed the Pythonos a smile.

One question… how old is Marcurious?

@savannah_grace2009 Ooh, this is really interesting! Haha, I noticed that about @scoutfinch180 too, it was very thorough!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so flattered you value my opinion!

I might be able to help a little, but I am a hobby writer so I can’t guarantee how often I’m able to critique/post, but I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps. I wish I could guarantee you help, but I might have plans…[Read more]

*steeples fingers together and sets elbows on table*

@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @idk, anyone’s welcome

I discovered Alpha’s greatest fear (I’m very proud of myself).

At first, Alpha, to me and to my charries, seems fearless. Sometimes he also seems heartless (like the time he almost murdered a doctor because the doctor obeyed orders…[Read more]