SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

yeah that totally makes sense and I kind of see that a little bit in a lot of the families I know

like the oldest is usually more protected and stuff but also has more strict rules

where the younger siblings I know are always adrenaline seekers (including me) lol

and that is like the most amazing illustration I’ve h…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I always thought of him as our older brother, but somehow it never clicked until you said that! lol. I was kinda like, “I’m pretty sure I’m the only person who thinks this way, and I’m not sure if it’s right…..”

Wow, I love the picture you have just painted in my mind!

@savannah_grace2009

Sara, I’m sitting here a little open mouthed right now. I mean, I’ve always know than, but I never thought of us having that empty spot because He’s supposed to fill it!

(KP is eating my messages…… Sorry if you get this more than once………………)

@savannah_grace2009

😊😊

I really appreciate you, Sara!! 💜💜

(TPE link… https://editor.reedsy.com/s/RPRuZql)

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009

I did another Chase Drawing (and there’s one above this post too)

@grcr

Yes I can relate to the thankfulness of God’s mercy (no chance I deserve it)

It’s mostly in the brainstorming phase

@jonas

Ooh cool

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah I think for me I had to take a complete step back in a way to show God I’m willing and because of that I think He was able to open my eyes to the in-person peopl…[Read more]

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Some people…[Read more]

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@savannah_grace2009

😄

Aw that makes me so happy that you like it 🥹 Well uh yeah…. I am still writing it… but uh… I’m at a pause right now because my mom is editing it and we’ve taken a pretty long break lol… we plan to start back on it again soon and I’ve been trying to work on it here and there…. But idk.

I can resend you the link but I have…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I want to get to this eventually! I’m trying to finish a 1,300 page book right now so I’m trying not to read too much else until I do that. XD But I’m still subscribed to this. <3

@savannah_grace2009

Oh good, I’m glad Cass isn’t playing her. That was just horrible before.

So, since Cass is the perfect child (in Lilitu’s mind, I’d really like to see him fail in areas. Maybe in a way that Lilitu doesn’t even notice but the reader does. Ya know? Just my thoughts)

I liked this chapter a lot. Good job. One thing:

Liv had…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ah. That is very good news!

also, do still tag me!! I still am reading your story, I just don’t usually have a lot to say though cuz I’m a bad editor. But I am still reading. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

Wonderful! Tag me when you do!

@savannah_grace2009

Not at all. Tag me whenever you want.

This is a really good chapter. Well balanced dialogue, not cheesy on the emotions, but enough to make you feel them. Well done.

(I’m really hoping for more Eloy in this draft. *hint hint*)

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I read the part, and I think it’s a good introduction to Lilitu. I don’t know if you want critiques, so try I’ll keep it at a minimum.

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Yeah, I know! It was crazy, I would only be able to do like four drafts before I’m like “Eh, let’s just publish this already” lol.

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! I’ll read it after Christmas, cuz that’s probably when I’ll have time.

@savannah_grace2009 that’s cool!!

And hey, redrafting can be fun, reading through your story and thinking “oh, I gotta change that” or “what if I switch around these two scenes? It might flow better that way” or “let me change up this character’s role…..”

Except if you do too much. I read a comic recently that had 27 drafts before its final…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I love this one too! I’m assuming the story, or at least the beginning, has changed a lot from previous drafts. It’s going in a good direction!