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freedom posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 Would y’all believe me if I told y’all Riker was going to be the villain in the original idea for Freedom’s Fire? 😂
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whaley replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 1 year, 9 months ago
It is!! I will probably post some more ideas soon.
I also don’t think everyone needs my advice/ideas because each person thinks in their own way. But I don’t know who will randomly see this topic and be helped by it. So again, anyone can give tips here because it might be of use in the future.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@loopylin @stephie @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter the 9th is ready to read!
The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book I: The Cost
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@grcr @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @anyone-else
I am unavailable on August 1st, but other than that, I’m available whenever.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I don’t feel like mine are that great either lol
but there are people out there who like them, and I like that, so……
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
*crying* “my poor unloved character!!!!” (just joking!!!)
OK, I’ll take a look. Thanks!
btw, if all you want is to see Aaron cry, you’ll get your wish soon enough. hahaha
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Hiiiii! Thanks for asking! 😊 I’m doing alright, living life a day at a time. The Lord is testing our whole family rn, showing us things about ourselves that we need to deal with now before bridges are burned and relationships are ruined.
But beyond that, my mom is going to teach me how to grill today, so I’m very excited for…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Is Aaron really bland? I thought he had a lot of character…….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hybridlore (oh hey haven’t seen you in a while) @highscribeofaetherium ooh I might do it too!
plus we can all chat while we’re at it lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 You’re welcome!! I really like your ideas.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 9 months ago
Well then linus and I will be partners in crime. No ships for us.
Catch us if you can…… (you have to find us first. lol and seeing as no one knows where anyone lives on here, that’ll be fun! hahaha)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr (Hi!)
I’m in!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 9 months ago
I didn’t, and the “playlist police” didn’t arrest me. lolololol
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 You kidding?? You have AMAZING worldbuilding!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
You’re welcome. I’m encouraged to hear you found that encouraging.
I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I have plenty of time to get better!!!
I should let you know I was horrible at writing until…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009
sorry this took a minute! KP ate it and I only now just realized that it didn’t send. 🙁
The days passed, and Turin, Noah, Aaron, Darrien and the others continued to tell all they met of Christ’s love and sacrifice. Many did not want to listen, saying there was too much going on to consider such things. T…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 1 year, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009, @ellette-giselle
Okay, I’m going to try this ‘Create a Playlist for Your Story’ thing, but I am going to need to think about it first. Also, I have one question, what does ‘Main Ship’ mean? Is this something to do with romance (I’m guessing that ship is short for relationship)? The first book in my series does not have any…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m 21. The other guy is 20.
NO WONDER!! I’ve been thinking “how is he so good with his critiques!!”
Oh yes, and what Linus said about Aaron goofing off and doing the handstand on the border is what I mean about showing a LITTLE immaturity. If you make him a little…idk, funnier and give his personality mor…
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Honestly, I’m not totally shocked. I can see him turning into the type of villain Alpha actually is. Driven by fear and grief. Ofc, I’m pretty sure that’s not the type of villain you had in mind for him since most his grief comes from him being a man who cares, but if he were to turn villain…
Actually, that might be a great fanfic AU…
WOW. Yeah I can see it…but it’s so weird to think about!!!