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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
If you gave me a deadline, I’d be totally down for it! Sometimes I’m busy with school and whatnot, but if I have a deadline, I’ll be sure to get to it and give you some feedback!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I wouldn’t mind!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sure! I still have off of school for another week, so I’ll have plenty of time.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sure, I can. I’m taking a break from my own WIP, so I definitely have some time to read through it. The link is the one on your profile page?
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!
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Liberty replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sure thing! I may not be able to get it to right away…at least all of it, but I’m willing to help you!
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
Broken Shackles is officially coming January 27th, 2025💜 thank you all for your friendship, love, and continued support…it literally means the…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?
I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:
Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 nope, sorry.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 huh, your link isn’t working.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 ooooh that looks so pretty!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Xandro can’t manipulate water on his own, and he does have power, but his powers lie “dormant” unless an Aquino combines their powers with his. It basically just gives the Aquino more capacity to manipulate moisture, if that makes sense!
But without an Aquino, he’s just a normal horse except he has the same “color scheme” a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
YOU JUST RUINED THE TONE OF THAT SCENE!!!! XDXDXD!! lolololol.
That was really good! I liked it a lot! I have written a few desert scenes myself, and they always make me hot and thirsty. (Great scenes to write in the winter 😉 )
That would be really interesting for water people to be in a place where they…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 wow! Interesting. Is Xandro a normal horse or is he some kind of water horse in the same way they’re water people?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
This song immediately came to mind.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
So thou art an enemy then! *brandishes whipped cream gun*
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hybridlore replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009
Have you two gotten on yet?
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whaley posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 (I don’t know why I’m hiding this update with another update, but I don’t feel like shouting things from the hills. XD)
I have been diagnosed with moderate major depression, one point shy of severe. I have recovered a lot since then, but I thought you would like to know, since you gave something similar to Liv. You are free…[Read more]-
Awww I’m sorry girlie *hugs*
I’ll pray for you <3
Thank you so much!!!!
Is it okay if every now and then I bounce scenes off of you so you can check if they're accurate? I worry about being too dramatic or unrealistic especially with mental health like this…
I don't have any questions as of now but I'll let you know if I do!!! Thanks Whaley,…[Read more] -
Thank you, Sara <3 I’m doing pretty well so I don’t want to worry people.. :]
Yes, you can totally shoot scenes in my direction! I actually really appreciate stories with the condition represented in it, especially because I had it for more than a year and can relate to all the stuff. There’s a character in Stormlight Archive that has a speci…[Read more]-
I know that feeling <3333
Thank you so much!!!! I agree, I love stories like that too. Even though mine wasn't severe, I can still relate!!!
Awwww *hugs*
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
It’s great that you are able to explore those feelings with characters. A phase like that doesn’t feel great but it can open your perspective. <3 (I’m going to shift this conversation somewhere else in a sec) - Load More
@freed_and_redeemed
AHHHH girl I’m so proud of you!!!!
ahhh love you girl, you’re amazing <3
Congratulations!!! That’s exciting!
Ahh!! So exciting!!! CONGRATS!!! 🥳
I’m definitely not crying rn because i’m so excited that it’s finally coming out
THAT’S SO GREAT!! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ IT!!!!!!!!
🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊
AHHHHHH!!!!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!! I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!…[Read more]
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
AYYY That’s awesome! Congrats!!! Can’t wait to buy/read itttttt (hopefully)!!!
EEEEEE I can’t wait!!
HURRAH!…[Read more]
YAY! Congratulations! *Dumps several buckets of confetti everywhere*
@freed_and_redeemed I know I’m not on much but this came through my email and AHHHH I HAD TO COME AND SAY CONGRATS FREEDOM 😭 IM SRSLY SO HAPPY FOR YOU! And while I don’t read historical fiction I already knew I was gonna be buying ur books girl. I HAVE TO OF COURSE!!! I ALREADY HAVE KNOWN THE CHARRIES! THE BABIES!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!
@godlyfantasy12 you just made my day😭😭 THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH💜💜💜😭 And yes, they’re available on Amazon! (Freedom’s Fire is in paperback, hardback, and Ebook; Broken Shackles is only paperback and EBook) I’ll send the link in a minute 😊 and I’d love to get you a signed copy…you just gotta meet me…[Read more]
WHY DIDN’T I KNOW UR OTHER BOOK WAS PUBLISHED AHHHH WHY AM I SO FAR BEHIND IN EVERYTHING SOOOB I WOULD’VE ALREADY BOUGHT ITTTTTTTTTTT @freed_and_redeemed
Will it be available on Amazon? If not, where at? I’m a paperback girly for the most part!!!
@godlyfantasy12 there’s the link!
@freed_and_redeemed
Awesome!
@freed_and_redeemed thx! ALSO!!! U may have said this somewhere else but since idk exactly how ur running ur series…which book is the brothers in…? (MY SWEET SWEET BABIESSSSS!!! I NEEEEED MY WOLFIEEEEE AND RUEBEEEEN AND ALL MY OTHER DARLINGS)
@godlyfantasy12 haha, I get it! XD Sooo my main focus atm is Leon/Riker’s trilogy, which means all 3 novels are only Leon and Riker as POV characters.
HOWEVER, the Bois first appear in Freedom’s Fire and will also appear in Book 3 (they’re not in book 2, tho, sadly).
And I have plans for them to have their own novel eventually, it’s just more on…[Read more]
ALSO UMMM ONE DAY I WILL BE NEEDING A SIGNED COPY MAAAAAM
yoooo you’re here! how’s your writing going?
@keilah-h It’s…not really at the moment lol
lol that happens.
@savannah_grace2009 @liberty @smiley @ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @keilah-h @koshka @theducktator @grcr Thank y’all so much😭😭💜
I LITERALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE COVER!!!
GIRL!!!!
yessss the cover is awesome.
You’re so welcome!!!!!
I’m so sorry I’m so late on this but
OH MY GOODNESS GIRL CONGRATS!!!! I AM SOOO EXCITED FOR YOU AHHHHH 🥳🥳🥳😭😭😭 SO HAPPY RNNN!!! I cannot WAIT to get Broken Shackles!!! Love you so much girl!!! <333
And someday I'll definitely have to come to one of your book signings and get a signed copy🤭
@lightoverdarkness6 No need to apologize!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRLY💜💜💜💜 I LOVE YOU MORE!!!!!
YESS and I just wanna meet you irl, soooo😂💜💜💜
@freed_and_redeemed OFCCC 🤍🤍🤍 Awww🥹
OMGOODNESS YESS 🤭🤍🤍 Same girl, I wanna meet you so bad🫶