SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009 I liked it! I can’t wait for more.

-The violence and stuff I can handle. About the only thing that would raise a red flag for me is what Rath did to Sef’s mom (I don’t remember her name), but you didn’t write that very descriptively and any discomfort I had with the scene was a me problem, not a problem with your writing.

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@savannah_grace2009

Aw, okay! It’s alright. Maybe we can end up doing another one at a different time, we’ll see.

@savannah_grace2009

You’re good. Have fun with your family and be safe on the road! I love family trips so much. Hope y’all have an amazing time. =)

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle

I’ll have to check with my parents to see if this is okay, and I’m not sure about my availability. Hopefully I can make it!

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle

This is a cool idea! Unfortunately I’m scheduled to work next Saturday, so I won’t be able to join.

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

I’m almost definitely gonna be able to do this, by the way. Just checked my schedule and I’ll be free that day! And possibly snowed in. 🤣

@savannah_grace2009

Hang on a moment………

Sara I just had an idea!!! What if I post the google link on here? on this status update! Wouldn’t that work and make it so no one has to give up their emails?

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator
His name is Theo! And yes, I have some pics.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m currently on chapter 9, and so far I think the pacing is good. I’ll get some more thoughts to you later.

Also, question. Are you planning on making Livia a main character in this draft?

@savannah_grace2009

I might be able to read it, but I’ll try to get back to you if/when I start.

Don’t let yourself think that you or your writing isn’t valuable, even if no one is reading it at the moment. You’re an amazing writer, and if God wants you to use that talent right now, He’ll help you to write what he wants you to.

@savannah_grace2009

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m interested! I probably won’t have time until after CWW though.

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!

I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! Ok, awesome, I love it!! 😂

@savannah_grace2009

It doesn’t have to be anything special, tbh. If you just said, “Hey can you get it fully read by the end of February” or something like that, then that would work great. Otherwise, I might just forget or keep putting it off. 😳😂

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

@savannah_grace2009 (Almost tagged you @Livia XD)

Lukas

Lukas chewed on his lips for a moment, resting his elbows on the bridge railing. The river gurgled by, providing fresh water for the fountain in the middle of the courtyard. He tried to get the words flowing as fast as this river, but nothing was coming to him. Whenever Lukas was…[Read more]