@savannah_grace2009
Active 1 week, 5 days ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
That’s so good! I will try to add on more later if I have time!
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Thanks! 😁
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I think I’ll let you find out what happens 🙃
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 haha I think that paragraph mistake happened when I was copying and pasting over from my document lol.
“At long last” is an expression (it’s like “at last”, but implies more of a “finally, after all that struggle”) but it felt a little weird to me too when I was reading it again so I’ll probably change that.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @freedomwriter76
If nobody does it before me, I’ll write the first RP either tomorrow or Friday. 🙂 (tomorrow’s gonna be busy, so I may not get to it. 😉 )
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Even though she’s beautiful she thinks that she’s ugly because that’s what she’s been told all her life.
If she ever says something self-derogatory in front of Amir, he’s going to be so shocked. 😂 And seeing her sort of red hair is going to surprise him (and @mineralizedwritings Kaine’s hair) since in his country red hair is…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @mineralizedwriting @trailblazer @freedomwriter76
Soo…. When do we begin?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Here’s another segment! Not sure if I got all the historical details correct, so let me know if something seems out of place or unrealistic.
August 1883: Settling Down
After two months of travel, we were in Iowa. Three weeks after that, we arrived in Omaha, Nebraska. Here we stayed for about a week, resting from…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey there!
I know this is kinda late, but I’ve read the prologue and the first five chapters. It’s really interesting so far, and I’m pretty excited to keep reading as you share more!
(BTW, Do you like the name Nevaeh? I have a sister with that name, so that was kinda funny to see. lol)
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hybridlore replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, it’s not working for me either.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@acancello @savannah_grace2009
I think it should be Victorian and in France and all. That would be awesome!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Should we do a traditional… Victorian themed masquerade ball? And where should it take place? France?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Dropping some more of the story… here we go with some more of the journey! It needs more work, but this is what I’ve got so far….
The next morning we were up before dawn again, starting another day of endless walking. This continued to be our pattern for the remainder of the week. It rained on our fourth day of the…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, how I think of it is by their fruits you shall know them. But to know the fruits of something, you either have to judge by the spirit beforehand, or you have to put it into practice to know whether it be good or evil. The problem is that while good trees produce good fruit, and bad trees produce bad fruit, there are some things…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @acancello @grcr @hydridlore
It looks like we only have one female character here thus far, so I believe it is time to announce mine!
Meet Kari Brock, age 16. She’s 5’4″, with delicate features, shoulder-length blond hair, and deep blue eyes. She is quiet and dreamy and values deep, close relationships,…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @grcr @hybridlore
Here’s my character who will be attending the party! Meet… Hugo Jim Walton. @grcr Hugo seems to be a lot like Lane, so they might be good friends! 🙂
He’s brave, bold and talkative, yet a bit annoying. 16 years old. Wears ripped jeans and graphic shirts, tennis shoes. Favorite color is g…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what I’ve been taught (and because I’m not sure if I’m mature enough to do otherwise).
That’s a perfectly valid reason, and I recognize trying to convince you of anything is just not what this conversation is for – which is fine 😊
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @esther-c
Acancello a masquerade (or not, either is fine) ball sounds great! XD I just watched pride and prejudice for the first time, I kinda wished I could jump through the screen and join the awesome balls they were having😭
Ok so since everyone seems to be doing super broken boi’s and girls I might as well…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
This seems fun, a masquerade would be cool because we won’t show the character’s face, allowing us to show them in an either more hidden light, where their true character is behind the mask, vs a more open light, where when there face is hidden, their true colors and personality can come out. I might add a character here…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
I love accents too!
Just a note, I won’t be able to RP for a little while as I am still pretty busy… 🙃
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