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@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I read the part, and I think it’s a good introduction to Lilitu. I don’t know if you want critiques, so try I’ll keep it at a minimum.

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Yeah, I know! It was crazy, I would only be able to do like four drafts before I’m like “Eh, let’s just publish this already” lol.

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! I’ll read it after Christmas, cuz that’s probably when I’ll have time.

@savannah_grace2009 that’s cool!!

And hey, redrafting can be fun, reading through your story and thinking “oh, I gotta change that” or “what if I switch around these two scenes? It might flow better that way” or “let me change up this character’s role…..”

Except if you do too much. I read a comic recently that had 27 drafts before its final…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I love this one too! I’m assuming the story, or at least the beginning, has changed a lot from previous drafts. It’s going in a good direction!

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you!!

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@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad to hear that!

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else

I signed up!!

@savannah_grace2009

Oh my goodness, Sef and Lilitu kissed!😃 I’m so happy! Poor Neveah though. 🙁 I do think it makes more sense to start the story here then when she was four.

@calyhuge

 Sorry no I have tournaments that week I think

Thanks for letting me know! What kind of tournaments?

@esther-c

YES!!!! I’m so glad you’re participating!

@savannah_grace2009

I know! I’m so excited, too!

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you so much, I didn’t think it would have that impact. While I was writing it I was wondering the whole time if people would understand it XD

@savannah_grace2009 It does have so much potential! And ehh, reading through it and editing little bits is half the fun for me lol

This is random but I’ve always been SO self conscious of my romance scenes…like part of me is obsessed with writing them but the other part of me is like I can never show this to ANYONE lol!

BRUHHH this is exactly how…[Read more]

I’m done with my 650 words!

Maybe I’ll post them later.

But now it is time for REVENGE 😈

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*laughs in…

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yeah

@whalekeeper

Oh, cool! How does the word count thing work? Does the website have a word counter thing, or do you just enter your word count or what?

@savannah_grace2009

I did see the website; I was just still a little confused. XD I might try it this year.

@savannah_grace2009

For some reason I like this a lot better than the ones where she was little. It fits a bit more somehow. Throws us right into the story.

For some reason it reminds me of the Keeper of the Lost Cities intros. I don’t know if you’re familiar with that book series but I was just reading the latest installment so it’s still fresh…[Read more]

I got an email about something called Crazy Writing Week. It looks fun. Does anyone here know what that is?

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@savannah_grace2009

Since I don’t know where you’re going with this, I can’t really provide a good opinion on whether you should keep it or not. It’s very different from any of your other drafts (which isn’t a bad thing!).

I would just say that if you’re going back to add more details about Andromeda, made sure you don’t get too info-dumpy,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with what Ellette said.
You should keep it! 🙃