SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr @rae @esther-c

If you do that, I think I’ll join. My character would just arrive separately though. If people don’t want to change this RP, we could just start Rae’s idea as a separate one.

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t mind if you do it… or I’ll do it if you don’t want too… I’m good with whatever….

@savannah_grace2009 @janellebelovedpig
Do you guys think it was an accident? Just really weird, she didn’t say anything about it. And she seemed like she was posting more often, too :/

@hybridlore @grcr

Thanks!!

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision

Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?

Hehe… Ok. So it’s a working idea, and it may change eventually as I flesh out the story more, but basically his parents are double agents. They actually work for the shah and are 100% loyal to him. But as part of that work, they pret…[Read more]

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009

What are y’all’s thoughts on my depiction of Thing?

@savannah_grace2009

What might help is to remember that you don’t have to choose them because you like them better. You should choose the ones that have the most interesting POV and character development.

Personally, I would say that the best three to pick would be Ottoline, Marcurious, and either Lilitu or Sef. And then the other two c…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It’s so hard to just pick one main character out of the set of five, though! I love all them equally!!! XD

You could pick more than one. One thing to think about is that if there are characters that spend most of their time in a group, you could have one of those be a less frequent POV than the other.

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore

Oh no! 😢 Awh, she will be missed.

@savannah_grace2009

It’s so hard to just pick one main character out of the set of five, though! I love all them equally!!! XD

That’s fair. I think you can make it work as well, it is harder for smaller stories though, but not impossible.

This is funny, to me it feels like they’re my best friends and if I choose one over the other they’ll get m…

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@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I agree with the majority of what Jonas already said. Although I think smaller stories can have many prospective, but it has to be done right. I could think of a few examples, though most are more contemporary, but I’m sure there’s many fantastical. I think a cast of 5 or 6 is a fair enough amount that won’t be…[Read more]

Yeah, it’s odd. She wanted me to help her prep for NaNoWriMo:(

@savannah_grace2009

I like this chapter! My favorite part was how happy the robot got when he named her “Thing”.  that was great!

Lol! Thanks! I’m glad it seems to be producing an enjoyable dynamic between the two😂

Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very conf…

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@esther-c @grcr @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @everyone!

=-=–=-=-Hugo=-=-=-=

Hugo Searched everywhere for Ottoline. Under the tables, around the food buffet, around all the dancers, and finally, finally, he saw her coming out of the basement, holding hands with Hedieh.

“Ottoline!” He cried out in relief, “where were…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, someone was talking about that… Weird! I wonder why?

@savannah_grace2009

You dont RP to much, I love to read yours!

@savannah_grace2009

You might not care, but I try to maintain a fairly equal ratio of male MCs to female MCs in a book. This shouldn’t be the deciding factor, but consider that adding Liv as a MC would give you a 2 to 4 ratio (double the amount of female characters to male), whereas you currently have as even a ratio as possible with 2 to 3…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

The amount of characters a book can handle depends on how long it is and how “main” the characters will be.

I keep using Stormlight as an example for some reason but in Stormlight, which will be 5 books long, each over 1000 pages, there are three main characters, but there are probably a dozen or so main-ish characters who…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Just popping in, I know I haven’t been very active on here…

Is 6 MC’s too many, or should I stick with my original 5?

It really depends. If Liv is going to be important enough to be an MC and if you can make each of their viewpoints interesting and make every character unique, I’d say go for it. I know GodlyFantasy has, li…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Any help would be great. I’m a hopeless case when it comes to making up names of places in my fantasy world. I normally end up looking up weird names or fantasy town name generators. So yeah.

The only reason i made it all caps was because it would make it sound/look more significant than just the word “unit” and it’s more…

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