@savannah_grace2009
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
He’s just too funny 🤣🤣
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I haven’t had time to read it yet, but one thought that immediately comes to mind is, if you’re still doing multiple POVs, is first person perspective the best option? I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist. I’m mainly wondering if you had a specific reason for changin…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I think it…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I can go.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Idk. I’ve gone twice already. @highscribeofaetherium hasn’t gone at all.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
*eagerly gets cozy, waiting for the fun to begin*
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Oh, that’s really too bad 😕 She was planning to restart her AIO roleplay, too.
Joining to outline at :48! It’s okay to skip NaNo. I am going for 30k at best, and even then I have a feeling that won’t happen. But that’s okay. Hope you have a sweet sprint!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeotheruim
Okay, shall save Nahim trying to run Zahlin for tomorrow.
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @anyone else
Oh, by the way, tomorrow, I shall be gone from about 7:30-8:00 to 16:30-17:00 Eastern Standard time.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
You know what would be fun? Once everyone calms down, the boys and girls play truth or dare together, lol
I doubt many people will want to lol. Kate already was completely uninterested, and Ellis would never want to play under any circumstances, especially not right now–he just wants to sleep! And Zahlin…that would be h…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah I don’t think many of the guys would find it interesting lol. Plus Kari’s soon gonna be worn out from all the excitement and ready to go to bed anyway.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Well, kicking it doesn’t exactly count, but if Ellis had actually grabbed it, Zahlin would kill him.
Lol I don’t think that’s going to happen 🤣
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @everyone
Nahim
The girls started attacking with pillows, and Zahlin hadn’t let go. Ellis gave Zahlin a punch in the face, but Nahim had meant what he had said before. Grabbing Zahlin’s arm around the girl he knew as Ottoline, he prayed her from his grasp. Then with a swift motion, he grabbed…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks lol
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol he’s so funny XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @rae @acancello @highscribeofaetherium
Amir
Amir sat up in bed upon hearing an uproar. Not again. He groaned and rolled over, slamming his pillow over his ears. He was going to ignore it all, when he heard Hedieh’s signature laugh waltz through the rumble of everyone’s voices.
If Hedieh was involved, that meant she…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaethorium
Javam Ram it is!
Javam has pale grey eyes and light brown-red hair. His face has defined cheek bones, and is always clean-shaven. I’d say he’s about thirty. Maybe twenty five.
He has a sadistic sense of humor.
He will never hesitate to kill you if you appear like a threat to him. (Hence, he…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @jonas
Hugos going to join real quickly 🙂
Hugo
Hugo heard fast movement, once again he sat bolt upright and smashed his head on the underside of the bunk bed. He rubbed his eyes and blinked until they cleared, shapes were moving at the far end of the room, they looked like they were fighting?
“Whats…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae
Krenna
“Alright,” said Krenna, “Whisp, scout out ahead.”
Whisp saluted sharply, “You got it, boss.” She ran down the hall, clipping through the wall as she turned the corner.
Krenna beckoned Loop and Ops to follow as she started casually down the…[Read more]
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