@savannah_grace2009
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I think for most authors, their first project is usually not ready to be published. I don’t like that thought either, but if it doesn’t get published initially, you can revisit it later and rewrite it. I don’t think it’s worth thinking about that right now, just focus on improving your skills.
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hybridlore started the topic Microsoft Word or Google Docs?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Hey everyone! Just curious–which do you prefer for your writing, and why? (And if use use another program, what is it?)
I used to use Google Docs, but when I started writing again I switched to Word. I don’t like how laggy Docs gets, but Word disappoints me sometimes. Mainly because I’ll leave comments and they disappear, and it only saves your…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Great topic, Sara!! @jonas had a great point on that. It’s hard, but just try to remember that if God wants you to be published, He’ll make it happen. I don’t struggle as much with that fear because of self-publishing XD. I figure if I end up finishing some books, if no one wants them I’ll either just keep writing or publish…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m also gonna mention it’s more Western style than English, so if I mess up and I say something that isn’t in Western, @savannah_grace2009 please correct me.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I think I think about my writing in a different way than most people, because I don’t usually struggle with this stuff. I write because I like it (not the process, so much, but the results) not because I want to publish. I don’t think about publishing really, I just think it would be awesome to have written a book. Pub…[Read more]
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Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Does anyone want to try Y-dubs/YWW with me??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Ooooh, I 100% second @euodia-vision‘s recommendation to try out Crazy Writing Week (I haven’t heard the dates yet, but it should be sometime in January). And hey, I would absolutely love to see you inside the program. 😀 *bribes with cookies*
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Yours was good too. We’ll see what everyone else thinks.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
If we keep causing chaos, we’ll never get anywhere. We should probably wait till they head to the jungle, which we’re almost ready to do.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, thanks for your help. I really wish KP had more (or any really) articles on plotting.
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Cloaked Mystery posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @acancello @keilah-h @beth-torres @calyhuge @trailblazer @esther-c (I think that’s all of our Character Party crew.)
I’m considering undertaking an illustration (or individual illustrations) of all our characters. Could everyone supply me with as much information as possible about their cha…[Read more] -
Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
🤣 Eloy and Cass are the perfect brothers! Please tag me if you write/post more!
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
The ones Rae gave you are really good! Have you written the next chapter yet? (I want to see how this ends 🙂 )
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 7 months ago
Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)
Lol! Thank you!!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m not quite sure I get what the “First Plot Point” is and how it’s different from the “Hook.” It says that it “pushes the main character into the central conflict.” Isn’t that what a hook/inciting incident does?
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 7 months ago
Heres one scene! (ignore all the mistakes) It takes place just as they are about to get to the capital, Bermill.
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He turned to leave, just as the chair slid out from under Vikii, she shrieked and Hugo spun back towards her and caught her in his arms. “Hey, not too bad, huh?” he smiled, “Got better reflexes than you t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
or we could kill Fynnor Fynn could go on a trip or something🤣
I don’t know why I find that so funny. That’s like, not healthy. 😂
I don’t approve of him getting killed, but I also don’t mind a little drama between my charries. Fynn could have to leave or something before the dance, then comes back and finds out that Callist…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I wish I could help but I don’t normally name my chapters (I struggle enough with naming my projects. XD). But I think Rae had some good suggestions. 🙂
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@ava-blue @savannah_grace2009 Wasn’t sure how to post pics of feathered mushrooms in that other thread, so I shall show you here. :]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Good night! I have to go!
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Ottoline has blonde hair that can appear pink depending on the lighting, and light pink eyes. She has a dark red beanie, and various scars on her arms. Umm she wears neutral colors I guess, like tans, greens, etc. (she’s my pfp, but you probably already knew that XD)
Okay. What types of clothing does she wear?
I really don’t know XD I guess I need to do some more worldbuilding! I see her as wearing a tan tee-shirt and some kind of leggings, but idk. Sorry! You can just draw her like that for now, I guess?
Okay.
No, he does not.
How big is his sword? And what does it look like?
Let’s see…
(Hope that works)
Its proportions are similar to that. It’s about 4’… 4”? Maybe? Long.
I’ll get some more detailed descriptions later.
Nahim has the red eyes ofc. Then pitch black hair contrasted to pale skin. His jawline and chin are kinda square. As far as clothes, in normal clothing probably grey or black Realn-style shirts with stiff collars. Pants are durable and easy to move in. Will sketch.
As far as armor goes, I’ll try to send some pics your way Tues Or Wed. Can’t…[Read more]
Alright, great!
I think you said Nora’s armor is blue, red, and white. What color is Nahim’s?
Nahim’s is a grey/black with carton like lightning bolts of bright yellow centers and almost orange outlines.
When I get the chance, the watercolor shows you that stuff.
He also has many armor markings…I tried to explain them, and I accidentally deleted it so, I’ll sketch them. I would wait a little to draw him, he’s kinda complicated.
I got a notification, so I saw it. Am I right in thinking that his weapons are on the right side and the pad where he gives commands to his armor is on the left?
Oh, and what shape are the crystal swords? Are they shaped like a normal blade, or is the blade more jagged and rock-like in shape?
Shaped normally. His is the style that can both slice and puncture.
As far as sides go, Nahim is skilled with a sword with both his left and his right, though prefers his right. Yes, he would hang it usually on the right but sometimes it is on the left. His holster is on the right, and set to be out of the way.
As far as commands go… He usually…[Read more]
Yeah, I get it.
Kari is 5’4″, slender, and fair-skinned. Her blond hair reaches just past her shoulders, and her eyes are a deep blue. She has delicate facial features (slim nose, thinner lips). She often wears jeans (at least during the colder months), with a plain shirt in either forest green, or lavender, or gray. Usually she’ll have a cardigan over that, too.…[Read more]
Carrie is thin and pale with lots of freckles on her face. She has very dark brown short, curly hair and dark brown eyes.
She wears dark colors. I’ll sketch a picture of her outfit tomorrow.
Snake’s name is tiny bit misleading lol. He has normal human body proportions I think. His tail is a bit longer than his legs, and his wings are one and a half times his armspan (but I’m assuming you’d draw them folded, unless he’s flying.)
For a reference picture…I could post one on the chat, because I wouldn’t trust what the internet has done…[Read more]
He also has prominent spikes on his neck and back. I’ll post some pictures of him and other Icewraiths soon.
So he’s basically a human, but more than twice as large, and with wings, a tail, and claws?
Yep, and talons for feet.
Oh, and his wings and tail are a pale teal color. His wings have a few dark green, tiger-like stripes close to where they connect to the body. His tail also has a few of those markings toward the end, and there are six small spikes on the tip–three on each side.
Here’s Hugo’s description..
Hugo is 5 ft 7in tall. Dark brown basically black shaggy hair (The length Grcr did is good) His dark brown eyes are kind of teasing and his face is usually pretty smug.
He can either be wearing a beanie or a backwards baseball cap, whatever’s easier. For shoes, he’s wearing black and white checkered Vans
His outfit…[Read more]
Ok let’s see, um…
So Amir has short, messy, brown hair; hazel (mostly green) eyes; a half-smile/crooked smile; tea colored skin; and soft facial features. I’ll post a pic of his clothing with a few extra details in just a minute. He stands about 5’ 6’’. I think that’s it. Let me know if that’s enough information. (: