Sara

K y’all, here’s the next part. @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow

As Aaron stood and spoke to the people, he knew this time something was different. He could feel the Lord working among them, and he could see in their expressions that their eyes were being opened.

By noon, several villagers had come to faith, and once it started, it…

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@savannah_grace2009, @keilah-h, @theshadow, @stephie, @loopylin

I will be working on Chapter the 8th this week. In the mean time, here are some more fun facts about a couple more characters.

Alan Wherl

Age: 22

Race: Wizard (though still mostly human)

Dominate Hand: Left

Favourite Ice Cream: Chocolate

Occupation: Solider

 

Trivia:

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@savannah_grace2009

What did I say! I knew there was something more to Eloy! I really like him now.

Cass is a jerk.

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️

You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?

You shouldn’t even be alive.

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Don’t tell anyone…they…

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@savannah_grace2009

Sef and Lilitu are adorable, dandelions are beautiful, and Eloy is way better than Cassian. AND YOU INCLUDED THE TOAD. OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! I’M SO HAPPY!!!!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3

Your welcome! 🙂

Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!

Ooh, can’t wait to see what happens!

@savannah_grace2009

Hi!! Sorry I haven’t responded for a while. I’m all caught up with your book, and so far, I think it’s really good! Lilitu and Sef’s struggle feels pretty realistic, although sometimes I get a little annoyed at the Pythonos sincwe they’re so ruthless. That’s good though, because it gets across that they’re evil and evil can…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Ouch. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD

It’s hard to dislike characters I feel bad for.

@savannah_grace2009
Oh…

*looks back*
Nah, it’s fine, I’m just blind, apparently.

@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009

Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll be praying for you <3

@savannah_grace2009

WHAAAAT? He’s doing it ON PURPOSE? Bad Cassian! I thought you were nice!

I still don’t like Eloy, he’s a grump.

Poor Lilitu, though XD getting hot soup sloshed over you is no fun.

@savannah_grace2009

Wait, Cass is leading her on? Why would he do that?

Btw though, the age gap is not bad, especially with the time period.

I think it’s a pretty sucky age gap but I guess that’s beside the point. Does this world have a time period tied to it? Sef was looking at a photograph at one point and it made me curious.

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I just realized I haven’t tagged y’all on the last sections I posted. So, they’re up above. 😀

@savannah_grace2009

WAIT WHAT? Cassian’s doing it on purpose? That’s rotten. I liked him. Btw though, the age gap is not bad, especially with the time period. So…. you’re going to have to use more the the age-gap to show that he’s leading her on.

I like Elroy too, I kinda always did, I just didn’t know much about him. I can sense something…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, she definitely needs a stuffed toad. Named Bartholomew, or Lollihops, or Snugglepie, or Melchizedek. And maybe some chocolate.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh no. I liked you, Cassian! Don’t hurt Sef, she’s gone through a lot. (And will go through more, since she’s the main character.) Lilitu, go buy your girl a comfort stuffie. Maybe a toad?

@savannah_grace2009

I will definitely be praying, girl. ❤️❤️ I’m sorry it’s been so rough for you lately! I didn’t know that about ADHD, but I have OCD, so I totally get that it’s deeper than people expect. (I haven’t been officially diagnosed either, but I’m pretty sure it runs in my family.)

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@savannah_grace2009

HE’S DOING IT INTENTIONALLY?!?! I THOUGHT HE WAS OBLIVIOUS! CASSIAN, DON’T YOU DARE BREAK SEF’S HEART. LILITU IS WAY MORE DESERVING OF HER.

Yeah, I like Eloy. How old is he again?