@savannah_grace2009
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 that’s cool!!
And hey, redrafting can be fun, reading through your story and thinking “oh, I gotta change that” or “what if I switch around these two scenes? It might flow better that way” or “let me change up this character’s role…..”
Except if you do too much. I read a comic recently that had 27 drafts before its final…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I love this one too! I’m assuming the story, or at least the beginning, has changed a lot from previous drafts. It’s going in a good direction!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you!!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@power @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin [Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m so glad to hear that!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.
Keep it up!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else
I signed up!!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh my goodness, Sef and Lilitu kissed!😃 I’m so happy! Poor Neveah though. 🙁 I do think it makes more sense to start the story here then when she was four.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Sorry no I have tournaments that week I think
Thanks for letting me know! What kind of tournaments?
YES!!!! I’m so glad you’re participating!
I know! I’m so excited, too!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you so much, I didn’t think it would have that impact. While I was writing it I was wondering the whole time if people would understand it XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 It does have so much potential! And ehh, reading through it and editing little bits is half the fun for me lol
This is random but I’ve always been SO self conscious of my romance scenes…like part of me is obsessed with writing them but the other part of me is like I can never show this to ANYONE lol!
BRUHHH this is exactly how…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m done with my 650 words!
Maybe I’ll post them later.
But now it is time for REVENGE 😈
@jonas 💨⚪4x
@theducktator 💨⚪4x
@linus-smallprint 💨⚪4x
@grcr 💨⚪2x
@rae 💨⚪2x
@savannah_grace2009 💨⚪2x
@raxforge 💨⚪2x
@esther-c💨⚪2x
*laughs in…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Lol, yeah
Oh, cool! How does the word count thing work? Does the website have a word counter thing, or do you just enter your word count or what?
I did see the website; I was just still a little confused. XD I might try it this year.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
For some reason I like this a lot better than the ones where she was little. It fits a bit more somehow. Throws us right into the story.
For some reason it reminds me of the Keeper of the Lost Cities intros. I don’t know if you’re familiar with that book series but I was just reading the latest installment so it’s still fresh…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I got an email about something called Crazy Writing Week. It looks fun. Does anyone here know what that is?
@whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @esther-c
@hybridlore @grcr @help-I’m-out-of-tags
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Since I don’t know where you’re going with this, I can’t really provide a good opinion on whether you should keep it or not. It’s very different from any of your other drafts (which isn’t a bad thing!).
I would just say that if you’re going back to add more details about Andromeda, made sure you don’t get too info-dumpy,…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.
I say keep it
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness. 🤯
Oh, I never read the prologue you posted…sorry. I’ll get to it this weekend.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Forgot to return here.
The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.
Now I have 20. What to do with them?
Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
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