SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@raxforge (you haven’t read this one yet) @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore

So, I haven’t finished this one yet, but it’s getting long so I’m gonna post it in two parts.

Also, I posted a section of this story above, and I will be making that section bold so that those who already read it can skip with ease.

With that, i…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I just realized that the reply I wrote for you didn’t post. Sorry.

He caught pneumonia, at least, that’s what I wrote his symptoms to fit, I never officially name it in the story.

@highscribeofaetherium oooh I didn’t know this was a thing! As soon as you’re done with Ellette’s, can I ask you for a character?

@keilah-h

XD, my first fanfic was when Bob the Builder and his crew built a gas station, but the Twiddle Bug, (from Richard Scarry books), knocked it down, and Wendy got stuck under it. I was really young at the time…I never wrote it down, I just remember it.

@linus-smallprint

That’s why I think it would be easier to do if Tyn was there. She would bring up all the objections, so it would be easier to show that I don’t approve of forced labour.

That should work. I’ve been thinking about this a bit over the last few days and I’ve decided I really like this idea. I don’t know how similar it is in Can…[Read more]

@smiley

I just read Cinder! I really enjoyed it, though it was a little predictable at times. I guessed Cinder was the Princess Selene as soon as Selene was mentioned. XD I loved Peony so much…why did she have to die???😢 I really like the doctor too, but I’m scared he’ll die too. My favorites usually do. I’m reading Scarlet now. I read Gone…[Read more]

@grcr

Oh no! Hope you get better soon. 💛

Thanks!

@keilah-h

When I was seven I assigned alternate names to my family based off the constellations (I was going through a space phase XD)

I went through a space phase at that age too! It lasted several years, and I still think space is cool, but I’ve been studying a lot of science for school, and I’ve…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for the Mistborn review. The friends who recommended Stormlight to me said I was too young for Mistborn, but I was 14 then, and I’m 16 now. I’ll probably read it soon, but I’ll ask their opinion first too.

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! Thanks so much for reading it! I’m looking forward to hearing what you think of the rest of it.

Good point, I hadn’t noticed that, but it totally makes sense. I’m planning to rewrite the first chapter anyway, so I’ll try to take that into account when I do.

Wow, that’s terrible. That kind of thing hasn’t happened to…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

yeah…. If I wanna risk seeing porn worthy covers when I open it. I found a few round about ways, and I did to Alcatraz that rout (until those were taken down for being politically offensive) but I honestly don’t have time to listen to audio books and I can read a book in a couple hours. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@ellette-giselle

I have no problem throwing a book across the room. (I did that once. Right off the top of the bunk bed and into the bedside trash. I was proud of that shot) but it’s sad when you’ve spent money on the book, so thanks for saving me that for several of these. 🙃

Your welcome!

Do you have access to any audiobook library? That’s oft…[Read more]

@keilah-h

thanks!! I might take you up on it.

@anybody who wants to see but @theshadow specifically

here’s a quick sketch I did of Old Hunter’s face!

@linus-smallprint

sounds good.
After all “Stories Are Soulfood” and I’d rather feed my mind and soul with good things rather than a poison laced supper. 😆

@esther-c all righty!

@linus-smallprint

wow!! This is so helpful!!
yeah, as I said before I’m not even gonna touch the series with Lesbian characters. So I’ll skip that set. I’m intrigued by the first Mistborn set. Not so sure about the others, I don’t really like sci-fi anyhow. (Though someone told me a few of my books I’ve written are calcified as sci-fi! 🤯…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Up to the 6th chapter. Liking it so far. It looks like your opening is well-structured for the most part. I feel drawn in and can feel the tension. Sara finding the religion stuff interesting when others seem to think it boring or not worth their time makes her a character I want to follow.

One thing. From the opening scene, I was…[Read more]

@esther-c cool!! I’ll totally read it, if only for fun! Might pick out a couple of grammar mistakes here and there or tell you if  there’s a better way for a sentence to flow, but other than that I don’t think I’ll be critiquing much.

@elishavet-pidyon

Narnia was the first thing we seriously made up fanfics for that I remember. It was bonkers, but fun.

yesss early fanfics are always bonkers.

My first fanfic was a wacky Star Wars one where all the characters from the original trilogy rented a yacht and sailed around this one planet….?