@savannah_grace2009
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 4 hours ago
I think he’s more concerned that he can’t flex his abs. *Rolls eyes*
Legit concern 😂
Naw, jk jk. 😉 I’ll be praying! <3
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 4 hours ago
Heya, please pray for a quick recovery for my brother in the emergency room. He has a shunt for his medical condition, and while at therapy, they heard a crack in his neck. It’s possible the cord connecting the shunt to the rest of his body has snapped.
He’s doing fine. I think he’s more concerned that he can’t flex his abs. *Rolls eyes* But it…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
Yay!!
I found a round about way to get access!! (Don’t ask)
Should I be concerned? lol 🤪
Everette (I think) asks if Sara knows who Jesus was. Now, unless you have a very different theology than I do, I believe it’s who Jesus “is” not “was”.
Good point—I’ll have to change that.
Also, unless I missed something, the last we had wit…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 17 hours ago
haha! 🤣
I would love to see a Rory jumping from the bus, arms, hair, legs, and shirt flying! 🤣
if you post anymore drawings let me know!!
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 17 hours ago
Love how you always have illustrations on hand, by the way. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 17 hours ago
Thanks, lollll
(I just realized I try to match the other person’s tone, that person being you)
oh my word!! It’s so accurate tho!! That is a total Leo expression! And Rory is… yeah, being Rory. 😂
😁 Hehehe, I’m glad it has the right feeling, even if it’s cartoony. I felt like it was right to add Leo because he’s pla…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 18 hours ago
Could you expand more on what you mane by that, please?
I like to write down every idea I have so that I don’t have to contain everything in my head and forget it. So, the opposite of Ellette. (Why are we always the opposite? Why??)
I organize the ideas by topic (plot, worldbuilding, etc) very deliberately. I’m trying to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 18 hours ago
I found a round about way to get access!! (Don’t ask)
anyways!! I am really liking this!!
a few notes:
Everette (I think) asks if Sara knows who Jesus was. Now, unless you have a very different theology than I do, I believe it’s who Jesus “is” not “was”.
Also, unless I missed something, the last we had with Cole was his screen…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
*screams and dances around the room*
*looks back at it and dies laughing*
oh my word!! It’s so accurate tho!! That is a total Leo expression! And Rory is… yeah, being Rory. 😂
draw another one!!!
please!!! Pretty please!! 🥹🥹
(you don’t have too if you don’t want)
you could do Rory running away from Barns…. Or Rory ye…[Read more]
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 20 hours ago
My “outlining” consists of writing random notes all over the margins of my paper as I write and forgetting about them. One thing I’ve thought about, and may try, is writing every plot idea I have on sticky notes, and then organizing them onto a wall.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 20 hours ago
IS THAT ALAN ABD MARTHA!!?!? *excited dance*
umm…. I don’t do that. Like, at all. I just go for it after hitting beginning, climax, and end. And fully graphing characters. I sketch out the characters. 🤷🏼♀️
I mean, I treat writing as me telling you what happened to my friends. I saw the events, here they are. If I do too muc…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 20 hours ago
Great, thanks!! Yeah, I was trying to come up with something for the studying that would be interesting, but I’m not sure if I’ll change it next draft. I wanted to make something weird happen with the testing – the no answer changes being one of the first things I came up with – but I don’t know if it makes sense with the tests…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 21 hours ago
@whalekeeper
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 21 hours ago
*Shivers* Ooh, I love outline brainstorming.
Do you have any habits that help you think more efficiently?
By this, do you mean a method of organizing your ideas? Because that’s my favorite way of making brainstorming quick and easy, while also productive.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 22 hours ago
I read the two latest and thought they were good.
I like how Cole suddenly falls into his element and ends up with his team being the top in the class. I do wonder though how he knew the right answers if he never paid attention.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
I didn’t draw your characters very accurately. (They are both supposed to be older, Leo probably doesn’t have goggles.) But I remember reading a section of the roleplay and having a specific image in my head, so I drew it, and here it is. Rory stands, Leo is on the stool.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 22 hours ago
I’ll have to get that class moving, I suppose.
What’s with the neck thing?
Yeah lol, that’s my fault.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 22 hours ago
@whalekeeper @theducktator @ellette-giselle
Just an update for you all so you know I’m still working on this.
I’m currently trying to explore further for my outline and have switched to paper. Right now I’m trying to get everything I know about the story onto paper. I’ve started and stopped this a few times now, but feel I have fallen into a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 22 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 1
“Why is it so hot?” Hallie Woodbury tucked a loose strand of ginger hair behind her ear.
“I only have two words that can answer that question: New. Mexico.” Easton straightened and tossed his light brown locks off his forehead with a quick shake of his head.…[Read more]
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