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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 day, 11 hours ago
And share some of it… I love your style.
Yayy, maybe I’ll do that. If there’s something to show. I’ve been drawing a lot of one character, but I’m drawing her without her mask and I’d like to keep the mystery going until I feel confident with the design. It’s difficult to stick with one drawn version of a character.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 11 hours ago
@loopylin @koshka @theducktator @raxforge @whoever
Barnes
A couple times, students wandered to the edge of the field. Barnes fixed them with a deliberate stare, tapping her wrist to indicate they wouldn’t be restricted forever.
Another kid ran up from the school entrance. This kid was paler than the others, with tufts of light hair glaring in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 5 hours ago
Rory
Rory shrugged uneasily. He glanced over his shoulder again as they walked down the hall. “Do… do you think they could still be here? In the school? Watching us?”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 6 hours ago
I think blowtorching people is to violent for this RP 🤭
Rory
Rory and Leo road the elevator up to the ground floor. Rory forced himself to think about anything but the moving ground beneath him. They got off and headed toward the school entrance. As they walked through the quiet halls, Rory couldn’t help but feel the need for…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 7 hours ago
@ellette-giselle thanks, got it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 7 hours ago
Just emailed it to you in case she doesn’t want the link public on here.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 7 hours ago
@ellette-giselle sure, thanks!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 7 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 7 hours ago
Yay!
Rory
Rory shrugged and looked down. He tested his weight on the brace a moment, and then spoke, his eyes still on the floor. “I don’t know. Something without planes or guns. A place I don’t have to kill people.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 8 hours ago
They’re gonna be horribly confused when they realize that the galaxy Scout, Huntress and Sniper come from is basically just a version of Earth where every country is a planet. Hopefully they won’t start talking history, or things wil get really weird. LOL.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 8 hours ago
And your features remind me of the Eidechse!
[I’m assuming he’s talking to Sniper here, in terms of the lizard thing. Unless he’s just referring to Scout’s forked tongue.]
Huntress: Eidechse….That sounds like a Drachen word, kinda. It’s got the same harshness to it. I wonder if Medic’s ever heard it.
Ailurid….What does it…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 8 hours ago
@hybridlore where are they? I don’t see them on the part 1 document, is there the part 2 doc anywhere?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 8 hours ago
@the_lost-journal okay!!
*Scout sees Leander being interviewed*
Scout’s thoughts: Hey, an Ailurid! Although his eyes look more like a Changeling’s. Maybe he’s a hybrid.
*He nudges Huntress to get her to look. She notices Leander and comes over to him*
Huntress: You remind me of my best friend. He’s got catlike ears and a tail just like yours.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 8 hours ago
@the_lost-journal lol yesss
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 9 hours ago
They started out together and ended up in Landstraten at the end of book 3. I’m just picking up where I left them.
Oohh… that explains the creepy mask …
*nods and smiles*
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 9 hours ago
Good section! I like it.
It was a little unclear that the other three men were joining Leon and Julian until now, unless they were in the first scene and I’m completely blaming. I just don’t think we got to hear that they were back yet.
My guess is that since no one has seen the prince’s face, they will replace him with his c…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 9 hours ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
hopefully this doesn’t feel to fast. The end of this section is where the story really starts to kick back in. We had a lot of travel in the 3rd book, and I’m trying not to literally go back over ground we already covered.
It was a bitterswee…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 11 hours ago
@the_lost-journal I think Leander’s my favorite character of yours so far!
Mind if my characters ask him a few questions? They’ll probably be surprised at how similar the creatures of their worlds are.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 22 hours ago
Nope, just gotta ask someone else some questions.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint
Next two chapters!
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