SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@rae

BEWARE my charries know how to make swiss cheese! XD

I’m dying….lol!

@esther-c

Aww poor Lukas!!!!

Livia

She didn’t know whether to be hurt, or laugh. But then she saw the horrified look on Lukas’s face, and the way Xandro glared at him, and then she burst out laughing.

“I walked right into that one,” she laughed, “You do have a point, though,” she said thoughtfully. She saw the pained look on Lukas’s face and…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.

Yep! Exactly.

That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…

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@rae @jonas

I’ve never written something that makes me cry…But then again I don’t usually cry reading anything.

Well…hehe….I once wrote a dumb story (last spring) about these kids. One of the older brothers got pushed off a water tower (it’s dumb okay???) and I wrote the siblings grieving over him….I actually started tearing up and almos…[Read more]

@vinagirl

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

That’s the link to my book 🙂

@jonas

I know it’s baking soda…I don’t live under a rock, contrary to what everyone in my school thinks haha! It just reminds me of it…

But soft drinks sounds….weirder.

@vinagirl

YOU HOARD CHICKENS TOOOOO?!?? We have like 80 chickens 🤣 how many do you have? I am very curious now.

I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I h…[Read more]

@esther-c

wonder if Lukas was coming to the dance or not, but he shrugged it off. He’d ask him later.

lol! I can’t wait for that awkward RP…lol

hey…what if Lukas and Liv were partners? Fynn would never stop laughing….lol

Livia

“How do you dance, anyway?” she asked, laughing a little at her own ignorance. “I don’t know a thing about it. A…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge

Thanks guys!!

will miss the only character who’s more insane than me 😢😞

lol!!!

@jonas

*gasp*

I don’t know whether to be insulted, or….too late, I’m insulted 😂😂😂

(soda just sounds like a white powder you’d put in a cake, not something you should drink…lol)

@rae

I LOVE how you described Wyoh….lolol!

@vinagirl

It is (in my humble opinion) pop.

YESSS. ThAnK yOu!!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

SEE? I’m not the only one!!!

@vinagirl

Hey there! I’m Sara, sometimes called Savannah by my readers (my pen name is Savannah Grace). I’ve never published a book before but I’m trying to get there!

I’m a freshman in high school and attend a public school (WHY am I the only one on KP that doesn’t homeschool??). I used to homeschool, but then transferred because God said that…[Read more]

I’m sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP. It’s just kind of a lot to keep up with and I’m already in several other RP’s. This has been really fun and I’ll really miss RP’ing Fracture…*cries* XD I just really need to focus on my WIP.

Thanks for understanding!

@lydibug

Sorry, I’m going to have to not join after all. I need to focus more on my writing, and I’m already in quite a few RP’s. Though this is a really cool idea!!

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Sorry guys, but I’m going to have to leave this RP to focus more on my writing. Just thought I’d let you know!

@hybridlore

Okay, so this is sort of like a spiritual battle? Sef can defeat the Pythonos because she is willing to stand up to their lies. Lilitu is a Payne too, though, right? The reason Sef is the only one who can defeat them is because she has believed their lies and he hasn’t?

Essentially, yes, and…no. It’s hard to explain the thoughts i…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]