@savannah_grace2009
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
Funny you should mention it because I just had a complete mental breakdown…
A social situation didn’t go very well and I got some super bad thoughts about myself and was beating myself up BIG TIME cuz I feel like I blew one of my only chances to get into a friend group. UGH.
*wipes away the last of the tears and tries to stop…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
It might be that you are so used to picturing Aaron’s personality, that your sub-conscience assumes Aaron is known, and thus forgets to describe him.
YES THAT’S WHAT I WAS WONDERING TOO OH MY GOODNESS! I also relate to that XD
The fiercely loyal bit is what I find unnatural. He only met Aaron a week ago, and up till t…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!
I have written 63 full length novels and countless short stories… so that’s saying a lot
HOW. LITERALLY HOW. I haven’t even written ONE full novel. I’ve onl…[Read more]
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Sara posted a new activity comment 5 months ago
WOW. Yeah I can see it…but it’s so weird to think about!!!
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
I’m not attacking Aaron, I promise! That probably won’t convince you, I know how it is with your baby characters…but just know I’m only trying to help XD I love him! I just think he has so much more potential and can be even better!!!
It’s not just him crying…it’s really knowing him and having an intimate emotional c…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Aww that sounds rough, but I’ll be praying!!!!!!! <3
That’s sooo great and awesome!
Happy for you! <3
@keilah and GRCR
Awww really?!?! That makes me so happy! I don’t feel like they’re that good…but thanks!!!
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B7X_-GIL5hU&t=780s
Watch this video. It really helped me develop characters!
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
I wouldn’t say bland . Bland is too extreme for Aaron.
I just can’t see much of his character right now.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months ago
I will find a way…😎😜
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
heyyy girl! How are you doing?!?!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months ago
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Sara posted a new activity comment 5 months ago
I’m still trying to comprehend what you just said 😳 *brain is loading*
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months ago
You don’t have to do a “ship”
UM YES HE DOES
jk jk lol
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Sara replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 5 months ago
Aww tysm! As a new worldbuilder this means a lot 💕💕
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Sara posted a new activity comment 5 months ago
I have never won Grand Champion (that’s my fault because I used dual purpose chickens instead of broilers and didn’t give them enough time to grow and get finished by fair) but I’ve won reserve champion! The first year I did it I got $900 which was INSANE!!!!!!!! Fair prices are CRAZY here…people have made $1000 for a market pair of…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
You guys…I need to have “Does that make sense?” as my signature XD XD
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
Sooo, I’ll have to see what you think, but I’ve been told by my beta readers that the first half of the book is about the situation Aaron is in, and the second half is about HIM personally. The first half sets the stage, the second half goes deep into the character. so, You’ll have to tell me what you think.
Personally, I don’t…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months ago
I shall attempt to give advice in the best way possible. lol.
but it’s definitely out of my comfort zone!!!
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Sara replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 5 months ago
Oh and about the names…
i’m soooo bad at names.
I literally just googled:
last names that mean water, plants, pain, etc.
So yeah. I know I’m a terrible worldbuilder and that should be a crime…but it works lol
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