Saraina

@freedomwriter76

Payton

“This group sure got big fast, didn’t it?”

Payton rolled his eyes back at Leon.

“That’s for sure.”

He turned to one of the newcomers.

“Yeah, you guessed it. We’re trying to get out of here. You wouldn’t happen to know any way would you? Oh yeah…and umm…uhh…that thing you were pointing at me. What does it d…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Verity

Age: young girl…. I’m still working this one out

Hair color: Dark red, long, straight

Eye color: Bright blue (think aquamarine)

Personality: She has a bit of a temper (Trevyn calls here spitfire, but he’s the only one who can get away with that…) She will say exactly what she thinks (except on her faith) and will de…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Sure thing!

@freedomwriter76 Jayden!! I’m so sorry for what Payton says!! NOT MY FAULT!!!

Payton

Payton’s face started going blank as the man said his name. Wow. That was quite a mouthful.

He cleared his throat.

“Captain Asher Graham Carter of the US Navy,”

Hey I got it right!

“My name is Payton. I didn’t mean to threaten you like that. But alone in the…[Read more]

XDXDXD Oh Michael I love it! Verity will probably come in here like a whirlwind in just a sec….

@freedomwriter76 JAYDEN!! I’M CRYING ALREADY!!

Payton

Payton watched as a door on the side of the corridor opened and three men stepped forward, they were dressed very strangely. And Payton reacted the same way he had with Leon. His dagger flashed forward. One of the men pointed a metal barrel-shaped thing at him.

Did he actually think that…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 *bows low* Thank you! XD XD XD

We do that because who cares what anyone else thinks? THEY ARE TOO REAL!!!

Oooh…I read that! Man…Verity needs to come over there and pull Riker into a hug and glare at Franz before taking some more…ummm….drastic measures….

Verity’s begging me to go over to help Riker but I told here…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sorren

The mists cleared before Sorren’s eyes. Alvastia had melted away, now he was in another place. Who cares? This old castle couldn’t worry him less. Escape was not a possibility. It was not an option. It was the only choice.

Voices coming from the corridor raised his attention.

Good. He was glad that he was no longer…[Read more]

I just noticed I’m a wise jester now XD A loudly sobbing wise jester buying way too many tissues at the store….

@freedomwriter76 XD
*sniffles as I help you load up a cart with tissues and ignores the stares of other concerned customers*

Who knew I’d be sobbing my heart out about fictional people I’ve never ever seen?

Okay. To get this started I’m going to put myself in Sorren’s mind….not a happy place to be….

@freedomwriter76 Can we just stay here and cry all day? My family will be very concerned…

“Sydney, what’s wrong?”

*sniff*

“It’s – it’s (sniff) Riker….and Leon….and JAYDEN!”

*breaks down again as family looks on in concern and confusion*

Bye. I’m going to a bulk store somewhere and am going to deplete their store of tissues…..

*Verity…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 If Verity gets worked up at Soren yelling and sees Jayden’s reaction she’s going to go into “protect my friends at all costs evil villain you must shut your mouth or prepare to meet your doom” mode.

Wow. This is going to get intense and interesting VERY FAST!

@freedomwriter76 JUST WHEN I THOUGHT NO ONE COULD POSSIBLY HAVE A SADDER STORY THAN RIKER!!!!

*leaves you and Rker to go hug Jayden and almost drowns him in an ocean of tears*

*sorry*

(Also, Sorren may yell and attack people so I’m sorry about that but I can’t control what he will do….SORRY IN ADVANCE JAYDEN!! IT’S NOT MY FAULT BELIEVE…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Okay these two are friends and they are my allegory charries so I put them in here b/c I don’t know a whole lot about them and I want to find out. SO feel free to tease them, make them laugh, cry, push any of their buttons you find. Whatever. You have my full permission! lol

Verity

Age: young girl…. I’m still working this one…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 (I’m loving your new characters btw!)

Okay here’s my main antagonist:

Name: Sorren

Nationality: Northern soldier

Family: Has none needs none

Age: I’m terrible at ages!!! Okay, he’s a grown man. How’s that?

Hair color: Black

Eye color: Steel Gray, cold and hard

Personality: Hard, cruel. He’ll use anyone he has to and walk…[Read more]

Should I put their info here before I continue with Payton’s perspective?

@freedomwriter76 That’s so funny b/c I was about to ask you the same thing – hence Payton’s question. The more the merrier! I’m considering putting the main antagonist of my WIP in…so I can 1) get a rise out of Payton and 2) I want to make sure he’s not the “stereotypical villain” if you know what I mean.

I have one other person to throw into…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 *joins you in sobbing forever*

I figured you did! 😉 That’s so incredibly sad and I love it at the same time! Yes we all have to start somewhere…

@freedomwriter76

Girl, you didn’t!!!! POOR RIKER!!

*gives Riker a huge hug while glaring at you*

I’m sure you had good reasons…..the things our poor charries must endure at our hands….