Sarah Hoven

This is a really cool story! Let me tag some more people who are better editors than I…@kate-flournoy @daeus @bluejay @hope @gretald
I like the way you incorporated the Scripture into the story- especially at the climax.

This is a really cool story! Let me tag some more people who are better editors than I…@kate-flournoy @daeus @bluejay @hope @gretald

@daeus That’s so sad. I’m praying for you.

I also like serious historical movies, like Valkyrie, which is about Claus Stauffenberg’s plot to kill Hitler (@kate-flournoy You’ve seen that one, right?), and Jean La Pucelle, which is a French movie about Joan of Arc, extremely accurate and very well done, plus it’s in French which makes it doubly awesome.

@Rolena-Hatfield Aha! I wondered why they were using knives instead of revolvers. While I don’t know if that sentence is gramatically impossible, you switch subjects halfway through the sentence without warning, which is a little confusing. I think it would be less confusing if you said “he reached out and clutched the cards, causing a cold sweat…[Read more]

@Michael-Stanton My favorite thing about the forum is just being able to interact with all the people; I’ve taken a break from writing, so I don’t use it for that right now. I can’t think of anything that I don’t like or that I wish was different. It’s awesome.

@Brandon-Miller Yay, another KP staff person! It’s nice to meet you. (p.s. my tag is @Sarah-h; the -oven gets deleted.) You do learn the tags pretty quickly; it’s not as hard as it seems.

@gretald I’ve seen those! Fireproof is my favorite; Courageous is too sad, and I was so mad at the ending because Shane was my favorite character. I do like Javier, though, so I can’t say I don’t like the movie. Have you seen their first movie, Flywheel? It’s not the same quality, being a first movie, but I still really like it.

The music in…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield Yes, more! 🙂 This is great. Does this story take place in England or America? It seems like a Wild West setting; is it? There is one sentence that looks like a mistake:
“He reached out and clutched the cards a cold sweat running down the back of my spine.” I don’t see anything else.

October Baby is one of my favorites. (It’s about abortion.) The way they developed the theme and characters is really well done. One Night with the King is really good, too; it’s about Esther. Oh, and I just watched Prince of Egypt for the first time a few days ago. I didn’t know it was possible for an animated video like that to make me cry, but…[Read more]

@gretald #2? It’s hard to hate guacamole.

@michael-stanton I use the forum most often. Aside from that and the home page, I don’t really go on the rest of the site (although I really like it and I’m glad it’s there.)

@gretald Haha! That sound worth reading. My favorite is Henry V, mostly because of Pistol and the Welshman. And it has a happy ending, unlike the tragedies. I know Hamlet was supposed to be sad, but I thought it was very funny. It’s probably my second to favorite one.

@bluejay I haven’t read them, but I like @spradlin‘s suggestion. “Fighhting their way out if the darkness” – that sounds cool.

I don’t know how possible this is, but what if you pick up where Tarea left off and go a little further into the story? I like Cedric and Tarea, and I want to know what happens next.

@clairec #2? Are you really half American? Oh, and in another topic you said you’d been to America before. Where in America?

@gretald Oh, yuck. That sounds horrible. I will never eat sea urchin. With other sushi– was it raw, then?

@gretald Somehow I missed Much Ado About Nothing. What is that one about?

@Michael-Stanton I can’t think of anything either. You guys are amazing. 🙂

@r-e-p I haven’t heard of the Midshipman Quinn books, but I quite agree about books targeted for boys. I grew up reading old adventure books like Jack Harkaway, Bob Steele, the Rover boys and Harry Castlemon’s Frank series. They don’t write books like that anymore….
WWII is my favorite era to read/ write / research. I like discovering the…[Read more]

@gretald I guess that #2 is a lie. But if it isn’t, what was it like? Was it all shredded up? I’ve seen sea urchin skeletons, and I’m wondering how you would get to the meat, if there’s any at all.