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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Sounds good, I’ll leave the grammar edits on the suggestions bar:)
Lioness’s first chapter is just SO intriguing, I’d love to read more if you decide to post the second chapter! -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ah, that’s amazing! Cedulnians? They sound sooo interesting:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I love those collages, they are amazing! 😀
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 9 months ago
Ooh yes! I saw that collage, it was sooo good:) I like Daren already!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hey y'all, I'm new! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Hi Jodi! Welcome to KP!
I’ve heard of Prydain chronicles before and they sounded extremely interesting:) What’s your favorite thing about them?
I usually write in many different genres, but I absolutely LOVE fantasy! What is your favorite setting to write in?
It is awesome to have you here! 😀 -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
In answer to all four questions: yes!
It was excellent! I’m so curious about Nova Terra and the MC. I was hooked all the way through and I love Emiyn’s sarcasm! It’s an amazing piece 😀 The only edits I’d make have to do with grammar:) -
Abigail.M. posted an update 3 years, 9 months ago
Hi Joy! So I ran across a book today and I thought of your WIPs. And you like Old Testament stories right? I haven’t read this book yet but the title is “Rediscovering Some Old Testament Characters – Fascinating Stories Of Forgotten Lives.”
By Charles R. Swindoll.
So I just thought I’d let you know in case you’d be interested in it:) -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Six O'clock: A Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow! That helps me out much more than you know:D
That is such an excellent point that depending on who’s POV I’m using, the way things are seen and described will appear different. I never thought of that before:) Also, I appreciate you putting together the example pieces, I definitely see what you mean about using shorter sentences…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I absolutely LOVE this collage! 😀
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 9 months ago
Awesome! Who is the MC?
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 9 months ago
Awesome first lines! 😀
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
This sounds awesome! I’d be glad to read and critique:) Warning: I am a pretty slow reader:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Six O'clock: A Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Well, nothing too specific, perhaps about writing scenery and action? But I’m always grateful for any and all tips you have:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Six O'clock: A Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
I just finished it! You are definitely a master with descriptions (do you have any tips on them?) The imagery was so clear, I literally saw everything happening scene by scene:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic What is the first sentence (or first three sentences) of your current WIP? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow! Those lines set up the action straight away:) Awesome!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
And it is just way too awesome that Newton gets a whole chapter all to himself!! 😀
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
(*trying to contain excitement but failing miserably*) I AM SO DEFINITELY GOING TO BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR CHAPTER 2!!! 😀 😀 😀
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