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@ingridrd You’re not too late. 😀  I’m still here.  What are you working on?

@rochellaine  I know I’m late, but I am here now (for a little while).  🙂

@ariel-ashira Do you not know how to edit posts after posting them?

Well…I’m trying to.  The man just refuses to be rescued.  Actually, though, it’s Chara’s fault.  She’s taking too long to find him.  I really hope she can find him soon, or the story will be pretty boring. 😛

@ariel-ashira Yes, I’m still here!  What are you working on?

@seekjustice Thank you so much!

@ingridrd Oh, interesting. 🙂

Anyone want to join me in writing? @jenwriter17 @alia @ariel-ashira @skredder

*creeps into forum* I have a couple more prompts. *rubs hands together*

“I’m tougher than I look.”

“Good, because you look like a kitten with the heart of a marshmallow.”

In the future, everyone wears glasses that allow them to see warnings the government issues about people. You’re in a bookstore one night when you glance at a shy-looking…[Read more]

@ashlyvye I was recently talking about POVs with my fellow writer friend (Hi, @princessfoo ! *waves*) and something she pointed out about multiple POVs is that one is often more interesting than the other. So, the question is, is Macx’s POV more interesting to readers than Haylie’s? Will they wish you would switch back to Haylie’s more often, or…[Read more]

@catwing XD

@ariel-ashira What I do is I pay attention when I’m singing to what kind of people are nearby.  When I’m in a group of conservative Christians, I sing only hymns.  Then, when I get to know someone better I’ll ask them what kinds of songs they are comfortable with, and if they prefer just hymns/Christian music I’ll continue to sing hymns, but if t…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Praying for you!

@filewriterbase13x That’s a nice start to a story. Here’s my honest critique.

1) I would almost say it’s too detailed. Let me explain: in chapter 1 there’s a lot of backstory and explaining of the MC’s past. To me it kind of bogged down the story. I would suggest telling some of it but saving other parts for later. It would also increase…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Oh!  So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical.  There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother.  Things like that.  🙂 😉

@seekjustice What do you do for second degree burns?  I just tried to google it, and then backed out of a website instead of reading it because I was afraid there would be pictures of the burns there… 😛  I mean, I know generally what you do for burns, but I want to know if there’s any specific treatment that a paramedic or EMT would give on t…[Read more]

@skredder

Better than it has, not as good as it could be.

That describes a large amount of nearly everything I do… 😀

Yup!  Almost done, though.  Hooray!

@seekjustice Well, I can understand that, but it still implies that he was trying to be romantic, while the rest of the scene (as well as what we know of his character) really doesn’t indicate that at all.  The first time he says “romantic” it’s a joke, and a little flirtatious, which is fine, but the second time it just sounds really weird. 🙁  S…[Read more]

@skredder Short stories, huh?  I love writing short stories!  Except…I rarely finish them. 😛  I’ve finished a couple though.  How’s it going now?

@seekjustice That was not fifteen minutes.  That was an hour. 😛  Looks like I’m bad at giving estimates!

But anyway, I’m here now, and it looks like you’re about to leave. 🙁  By the way, I did give you the comment about Justice, but I put it in your document instead of here.  Did you get it?

@skredder Hi!

@rochellaine don’t worry you didn’t freak me out… Other things do that… 🙂
Definately praying.

@rochellaine I think my family was watching the announcement in the other room. *nods* I should be able to ask them.
*sighes* Things seem to come in threes though… But hopfully not this time…

@seekjustice
I’m going to bed now.

@seekjustice Haha! 🙂  Yes, definitely we need to be praying.  And no, the world will never learn.

I’ll be departing for about fifteen minutes or so.  See you in a bit!