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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Germany? Where in the world was that?Â
Oh well. Geography had never exactly been his strong point. And it wasn’t to the point at all right now. Payton stared at Leon in something akin to wonder. Whoever this man was, he had courage to say the least. He managed a smile in return.
“You’re welcome. I’m sorry….I – I didn’t mean it like that…I…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Awww! I love Leon!! 😊😊 Poor guy!!
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
It’s Payton 😊
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Payton
Payton reached back and grabbed another dagger from his belt.
“I’m sorry too. About your family, I mean.” He turned his gaze from Leon to the open passage behind them, the door was still swinging on its hinges. He took a deep breath. “I guess we better get started then.”
He took a brief pause to try and make out where they were. It…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Thank you! I’m having so much fun writing it! 😄
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
“No. Sorry, you’re the first person I’ve seen…Are you looking for someone?”
Payton felt the strength drain from his body, taking his confidence with it. He leaned against the wall. The man seemed genuinely concerned but that didn’t boost his own mood.
“My little brother, Quinn. I don’t even know how I got here. I thought he was with me, but if…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Payton
“You mean, you’re not armed then?” Payton lowered his dagger, running a finger down the blade. He stepped back to give the man space away from the edge of a knife blade. His forehead wrinkled in confusion.
“Sorry. I didn’t mean to threaten you like that. I mean, well, I guess I just assumed everyone else was armed, you know? Or I guess,…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Payton’s heart stopped pounding in his chest for the very good reason that it had leapt into his throat as he stared at the man in front of him. Payton pointed his dagger straight at this stranger.
“D-don’t come another step closer.” That the man hadn’t taken a single step towards him as of yet made no matter. “I – I’m armed and I know how to use…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Do I need to wait before responding?
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
That’s fine! I’m not 100% sure if I’ll put him in yet because it’s so hard to write about him without spoilers! XD I might throw him straight in though later! Poor guy he doesn’t have a clue…. 🤣
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
(Okay…here goes…kind of nervous about this….but….)
Payton froze, lying on the floor, glaring at the chair he’d knocked over in his haste. He cocked his head. No one.
Payton, calm down. It’s just you. No one else. If No one will find me here….no. They won’t. They can’t.Â
Ever since he’d arrived, his nerves had been on edge. Alone in…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Thank you for starting this!!
***I don’t have a title for my WIP yet***
Vanessa needed answers, but more than that she wanted her husband back, that strong, confident man who helped her discover the courage to stare down the future, unafraid of the storm because she held the Hand of its Maker. -
Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I love those quotes, especially getting to see Leon’s change from quotes 2, 3, and 4!!
Keep up the great work! 🤗🤗😁😁😁
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yes I know! I struggled a lot with that (mostly in the area of feeling like if I didn’t have enough “fruit” I couldn’t be really saved) so I identify a lot with Payton when I write him.
Yeah, I get it! I think many people struggle with that. Their two struggles put together…it’ll be neat to see how this plays out! 😊😊
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I already think Leon sounds interesting and I haven’t read anything but his profile! 🙂 This should be interesting….
You can start, if you don’t mind! (I’ve never done this before….XD)
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Hey fellow writers! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Ha ha yeah! I never thought we would have 5 goats! Yes XD He was the runt so of course he got VERY spoiled. I think his feet hardly touched the ground when he was little, we picked him up and carried his around that much!
YES!!!! Homeschoolers are AWESOME!!! ✋🏻😊
Me too! My parents own a homeschool bookstore so that was where I heard a lot of…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I forgot to put Payton’s faith in: He’s been raised in a Christian home, but he struggles with equating good works with meriting salvation since he lives trying to keep up to expectations.
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
(I’m not sure how many characters I need to have so here’s my MC. I’m not exactly sure if I will use him because I don’t want to spoil too much about him, but I feel like he really needs some development)
Name: Ethan (Ha ha. This isn’t really his name, but that would be a major spoiler for my first book so this is his KP alias XD)
Nationality:…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh good! I would love to do that! Okay, this is my favorite character so far. I’ve never really done this kind of thing before so here goes: (He wasn’t originally my MC, but now he’s stealing the spotlight of my writing)
Name: Payton
Nationality: Alvastian (medieval kingdom)
Family: Camron (father), Vanessa (mother), Quinn (younger…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Hey fellow writers! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Hi FreedomWriter76!
We actually have 5 goats….and mine, of course, has to be the naughtiest…..
It’s great to meet a fellow homeschooler here!!
Oooh! I love answering questions 😊😊😊 Okay, here goes
1. My genre is fantasy. Or as I call it, Christian adventure fiction. I mean, it’s fiction set in a medieval based time period, but it’s not…[Read more]
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