relia

“Did you really think that you could keep this from Mirabelle forever? When we met that night-”

“WHY ARE YOU HERE You were never suppose to come back, you had all the chipotle you could ask for!

Munch munch munch.

Mirabelle and I whirled towards the pantry in the corner of the kitchen.

Standing in the pantry was a figure feasting the last raspberry Poptart.

 The jenga tower collapsed and blocks tumbled across the coffee table and blasted me in the face (which had a very demoralized expression on it).

“What, I won? I WON!” My sister jumped up and pumped her fists in the air, acting like she wasn’t the one who had cheated.

People said that I should use tree sap instead of tar and feathers.

Even though it was a fictional comedy, and I was like 8.

I’m still salty.

@scripter-of-kingdoms

That’s totally true. I would feel so bad if I forgot something! Thanks for the advice!!

@daisy-torres

Yes, I have definitely been noticing that KP is good at that…. I hadn’t even thought about a lopsided draft, so that’s super good to remember. And thanks for the advice about the word count! Very helpful…[Read more]

@maryg3 Okay! Will do

@maryg3

Do you want me to share comments on here or by email?

@maryg3

Ooh I want to read it!! I think I can get it done by Friday. I love your title by the way. My email is nanisnook@att.net

Hey @madelyn !  I’m Ella, and I’m an ENFP-T too! XD  I know, KP was like finding a diamond, it’s so amazing. <33

I LOVE art!  Especially drawing flowers.  I do a lot of concept art for my books too.

What’s your favorite genre of music? I like r&b and hip/hop.

What’s your WIP about?  Mine is about a spy, and that’s pretty much all I know rn X…[Read more]

@sparrowhawke

Hey Bethany!!!  (I’m on SE too, but KP is def more active.)  Nice to meet you, I see you’re a lover of Latin!  I’m taking Latin 4 this year which should be fun.  A little about me:  I write dystopian, spy, thriller/suspense books.  I’m an ENFP and my favorite music is r&b and hip/hop.   I go to a classical Christian school, which s…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Well, I’m glad to hear that you’re stuck with TAS because that is not a novel to ever consider giving up on! 😀

Ah, thank you! Yeah, The Keep Legends feel sorta ancient to me now, I may work on the novel again someday, but as you said, we can’t and really shouldn’t invest in novels that we the writers can’t get invested in.
That…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216 @elfwing @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @gracie-j and to everyone who read the first installment:

I just wanted to thank every one of you again for all your feedback and comments, they genuinely are priceless to me and have been immensely helpful more than you’ll ever know. Every time I saw a response, my whole day was made…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

THANK YOU!!! Aw, girl, that makes my day!! I’m so relieved that the characters and setting are clear and everyone is likable, all this feedback is invaluable, thank youthankyouthankyou for everything you said!!! 😀 😀 😀

@gracie-j

Aw, thank you so much for saying all that Grace!! That makes me happier to hear than you can imagine!!! 😀 😀 😀

@nanisnook @lydia-s @nova21

Thank you!! 😀 😀 😀

@devastate-lasting

Wow! Thank you so much for all your answers, all this is invaluable and I really appreciate it! 😀 😀 😀