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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Sprite kid don’t get it. XD
Sypher
He followed the lasses in, settling into the seat be across from them.
“Eddie. Ellie. Ah.” He blinked at her in concentration. Grinned. “I am named Sypher, but everyone who doesn’t call me that, calls me Syph. As for dancing, or rather…I don’t believe I understand. What days are open”
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months ago
@kielah-h @ellette-giselle @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore
This is the final part of Story 9.
In my writing document, I named this story temporarily as ‘Delirium’ but I would like some better title ideas if you can give me some. Thx in advance.
Five days had passed since Baron had been taken to the Handel mansion and his symptoms…[Read more]
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Ruth started the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Hello!
So, I’m currently gearing up to write a fight scene (I’ll post it on here when I’m done) and I’ve never been happy with my previous fight scenes, so I researched a little deeper into the specific type of battle I wanted this to be. While attempting to write the probable failure of a fight scene, I got the idea to create this topic on…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power
Announcing the winners!!!!
First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.
Shadow:
What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months ago
Kefa missed your tags.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
The TwinsEllie paused in the doorway of the classroom, and looked around, deciding where to sit.
The boy behind Eddie almost bumped into her when she stopped as well.
“Oh! pardon my blundering.”
Ed shrugged. “You’re fine.”
Ellie located some seats near the back and Eddie followed. Once they’d both sat, Ed smiled at the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months ago
@raxforge (you haven’t read this one yet) @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore
So, I haven’t finished this one yet, but it’s getting long so I’m gonna post it in two parts.
Also, I posted a section of this story above, and I will be making that section bold so that those who already read it can skip with ease.
With that, i…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
So, Topic of the Week! Do we want to start it up again somehow? Please discuss here – if you want it to come back, or if you have any strong opinions about how it should be revitalized.
I’m hesitant to take Kathleen’s job. However, I have plenty of ideas of my own, and would be delighted to do it myself. If this becomes the game plan, I am eager…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009 @koshka @theshadow
Thank you!!! I will read over them today…and Lord willing, post my feedback tomorrow.
Okay! Thanks for letting me know!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
@koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power @jonas
TODAY IS THE DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you all ready to submit your stories???!!!! I’m so excited to read them!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Syph
This hall was getting rather full of too tall people, but this place was probably full of such halls. He sighed. Best to find his way while there was someone of the Big hight on hand to see where they were going.
“Nay, my friend. I must decline your kind offer, although I certainly do appreciate your generosity. There…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle (I know you’re away, so don’t feel obligated to respond to this until you get back) @theshadow @whalekeeper @koshka @raxforge
Sorry these are late, it slipped my mind until last night. Without further ado, here are chapters seven and eight (also known as the underground church cha…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Okay, so I think the way I want to do this is, I’ll give you a list of some of the options I’ve come up with, without comment, and you tell me what you like. I’m also not going to tell you what this magic system is about (though you can probably guess some of it from the names.) After I get some feedback, I’ll give you more context. Right now, I…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
😊👍
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Should I tag some people!? I guess so. ^^^^^^
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas
hello, hybrid lore told me to tag people if I wanted them to give feedback over my stuff, so if you guys wouldn’t mind, could you judge my story? Thanks! 😅
(it is…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah_h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet_pidyon @power @jonas
Please pardon me, everyone…I can’t believe I forgot about the deadline!!!!! So sorry about that…
Well, it looks like all things work together for good since Esthe…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @savannah_grace2009 @koshka
Please pard…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey guys! So I’m entering a little contest that one of my favorite magazines is doing. Basically they wanted me to finish the letter (they gave me like the first two lines) in under 250 words and they’d publish a few of the submissions they’ll receive in the next issue.
I need y’all to tear into this piece! Give me whatever feedback comes to mind…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Sypher
He followed the two girls, happy to have found someone that didn’t tower over him. Not that he was short. Some of these students were simply far overgrown.
Which made walking in their midst highly uncomfortable. Syph sidestepped a blundering youth, sending him a scalding glare as he slipped away.
The hallway was…[Read more]
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