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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
😂
Marcel
“Hey, hey, hey!” Marcel separated the two with a guarding hand. “We will not kill anybody. And I will not allow unnecessary attacks. Do you both understand?”
Hugo
The group passed the lobby bar. Hugo stopped to grab Victor and Lois cups of hot chocolate, and to grab a thermos.They…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Celarent
Mateo didn’t even know what school was? Celarent sighed. “It’s where you learn stuff. If you want to get anywhere in life, you better figure that out.” He paused. “Oh, right. You aren’t going anywhere in life anyway.” Mateo ought to get expelled. Celarent hadn’t spent days forging paperwork just to attend class…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Sorry I took so long to respond here. I saw this when I was sick and forgot to get back to it. Anyway, I enjoyed that and don’t really have feedback beyond what others have said.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Squirrelies! I love the fluffies. They are very intelligent. Unimaginative people completely discredit them. I think some of your rogue squirrels are running a gang in our town. XD The initiation rites include darting between the wheels of a car.
(@rae You definitely tagged the right people. 🙂 )
As for feedback, the idea is…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
😂 Thanks! I didn’t hear the sarcasm.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
The answer is “no.”
Lol. I like him to in a “he’s a creep” sort of way. 😂 (but he sure makes me laugh, and I love he’s paired himself with Marcel. Oooo! If he goes to the dance….. THAT would be worth seeing! It might make me poke my nose in!)
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Liberty replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Ooo! It sounds intriguing! Squirrel stories are always so much fun! So, I’m assuming something terrible happened between the squirrels and ducks?
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
@raxforge @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin
XD Oh Andrew, I forgot to tell you it will be a Foreign Cultures study.
Marcel
Hugo brushed himself off and strode briskly away, probably to join his original group. He was, for the most part, unperturbed – aside from looking paler than usual.
“How…“ Marcel shook his confusion off. He rubbe…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
@raxforge @theducktator @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon
Hugo (Angelo)
Hugo’s nervous laugh turned into a cough, as his sweater vest cut off his throat. Lois and Victor were already out of view. The skeleton student had him by the collar.
Hugo went slack, and held up a hand. “N-Nice to meet you.”
He could almost hear Marcel checking himself, tryin…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Mateo needs to chill lol
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
He hadn’t actually called Bird Boy by that nickname out loud had he?
You did, Celarent XD
Marcel
“How come? No flipping idea.” Marcel scoffed, letting out a husky lungful of air. It was best to keep people out of that world. “I’m Marcel.”
“Alias: your judge, jury, and executioner,” a kid teased as he passed.
“Shut i…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Celarent
Celarent folded his arms and gave Mateo a disdainful look. He hadn’t actually called Bird Boy by that nickname out loud had he? He knew the rules. Only mock people behind their back. Saying it to their faces made you sound juvenile. He groaned inwardly. He’d already broken rule 6: Forge an allyship with those in…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
😂 I feel that if these characters did not try to accept differences, there would be an active fight by this point.
Marcel
Responding to Mateo first, Marcel shrugged his shoulders one by one. “Immortal, undead. I see where you’re coming from.”
He looked at the other kid. This boy was still nameless, but looked much…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Celarent
Celarent side-eyed Mateo. Dead for a long time, eh? He certainly looked it. Celarent turned back to Bird Boy. He seemed decent enough.
“This is my first day. Does everyone have wings where you’re from?” Living on the streets, Celarent didn’t know much about other countries, but he’d assumed that none of their…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
yeah, I bet!
Oooooo you gotta keep that thing away from Rory. There’s going to be serious trouble if he catches sight of that thing. 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Mateo shook his head in misunderstanding, “No, I’m very old. Been dead for a long time.”
I died.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I can’t wait to see Marcel’s reaction.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Marcel
A faint smile tugged at Marcel’s mouth. “I’m going that way. Come on.”
Mateo and the other kid followed a few steps behind. They took a slight detour, so Marcel could kick a loose locker and catch a book before it fell all the way from the top of the locker row. Being able to hide things in higher spaces was…[Read more]
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