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Active 1 week, 6 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
WHAT???
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@raxforge lol ok then!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@raxforge as many as you can keep track of
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Celarent
Celarent glowered at Mateo, stuffing his hands in his pockets to hide their shaking. “Fine.” He could usually keep his mouth shut and convince people to like him, but something about Mateo made him forget every one of his carefully rehearsed rules of human interaction. It was infuriating. Celarent straightened…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
😂
Marcel
“Hey, hey, hey!” Marcel separated the two with a guarding hand. “We will not kill anybody. And I will not allow unnecessary attacks. Do you both understand?”
Hugo
The group passed the lobby bar. Hugo stopped to grab Victor and Lois cups of hot chocolate, and to grab a thermos.They…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Celarent
Mateo didn’t even know what school was? Celarent sighed. “It’s where you learn stuff. If you want to get anywhere in life, you better figure that out.” He paused. “Oh, right. You aren’t going anywhere in life anyway.” Mateo ought to get expelled. Celarent hadn’t spent days forging paperwork just to attend class…[Read more]
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Sorry I took so long to respond here. I saw this when I was sick and forgot to get back to it. Anyway, I enjoyed that and don’t really have feedback beyond what others have said.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Squirrelies! I love the fluffies. They are very intelligent. Unimaginative people completely discredit them. I think some of your rogue squirrels are running a gang in our town. XD The initiation rites include darting between the wheels of a car.
(@rae You definitely tagged the right people. 🙂 )
As for feedback, the idea is…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
😂 Thanks! I didn’t hear the sarcasm.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
The answer is “no.”
Lol. I like him to in a “he’s a creep” sort of way. 😂 (but he sure makes me laugh, and I love he’s paired himself with Marcel. Oooo! If he goes to the dance….. THAT would be worth seeing! It might make me poke my nose in!)
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Liberty replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Ooo! It sounds intriguing! Squirrel stories are always so much fun! So, I’m assuming something terrible happened between the squirrels and ducks?
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@raxforge @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin
XD Oh Andrew, I forgot to tell you it will be a Foreign Cultures study.
Marcel
Hugo brushed himself off and strode briskly away, probably to join his original group. He was, for the most part, unperturbed – aside from looking paler than usual.
“How…“ Marcel shook his confusion off. He rubbe…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@raxforge @theducktator @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon
Hugo (Angelo)
Hugo’s nervous laugh turned into a cough, as his sweater vest cut off his throat. Lois and Victor were already out of view. The skeleton student had him by the collar.
Hugo went slack, and held up a hand. “N-Nice to meet you.”
He could almost hear Marcel checking himself, tryin…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Mateo needs to chill lol
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
He hadn’t actually called Bird Boy by that nickname out loud had he?
You did, Celarent XD
Marcel
“How come? No flipping idea.” Marcel scoffed, letting out a husky lungful of air. It was best to keep people out of that world. “I’m Marcel.”
“Alias: your judge, jury, and executioner,” a kid teased as he passed.
“Shut i…[Read more]
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Celarent
Celarent folded his arms and gave Mateo a disdainful look. He hadn’t actually called Bird Boy by that nickname out loud had he? He knew the rules. Only mock people behind their back. Saying it to their faces made you sound juvenile. He groaned inwardly. He’d already broken rule 6: Forge an allyship with those in…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
😂 I feel that if these characters did not try to accept differences, there would be an active fight by this point.
Marcel
Responding to Mateo first, Marcel shrugged his shoulders one by one. “Immortal, undead. I see where you’re coming from.”
He looked at the other kid. This boy was still nameless, but looked much…[Read more]
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