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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Some of my fondest memories of KP are from the Character Party RP. (If you’re newer and don’t know what that is, I will link it below.) It had a good run, but eventually, it fizzled out and died. There have been numerous attempts to recreate it or something similar, but all have had the same result: a quick fizzling out and death.
But I belie…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Astro turned towards Navin, “Oh uh… No, I never heard of Takyon or wherever you said…. I’m from a planet where it is ruled by uh one… government… everywhere… Even the different continents” Astro was nervous while talking about his planet, as if someone would arrest him and send him to prison. “You don’t uh, think I said…[Read more]
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RAE started the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
So…this is a scene that I wrote at like 11:00 last night. It hasn’t been edited so sorry if it’s a total mess.
I’m not looking for any particular things like grammar and such, I’d just kinda like whatever feedback you can give me. Maybe how the scene effected you? Idk. Anyways, this is from Chapter 19…
Ash. Thick and heavy in the air, coating…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
I completely agree, although I’d like to ask how old they both are. Because Alan seems to have a lot of backstory for somebody who could be about Martha’s age.
Martha is the older of the two, by about a year. She is supposed to be eighteen while Alan is still seventeen. I know, I know, if she was two years younger, then they could sin…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Wait, why?!! Why can’t they have kids?!
I mean, Alan just has a few feathers in his hair, (and on his arm). What does that have to do with having kids?
In the world of Ehverwyld, magic is an allegory for sin. Sometimes we suffer the consequences of sin for our whole life. Also, as I was teaching the kids in my Sunday School c…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Thats a lot of my charries, what I mean is like they’re humanoid…. But maybe you could create a character?
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Kefa replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@Everyone on here
Wow, no one has used this in awhile… Do you guys not have any animal charries or something?
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Astro
“Oh, uh I’m sorry… I was looking for the guards… back at my old school they were everywhere… And as uh… for the student… no I uh… have no idea” Astro looked. around again. “Are there no authorities?” If so then uh who would report you to THE judge, for your uh well… tone… you know?” He looked back in fourth…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Fern
I looked up at them once again, “I, I have these vines growing out of me… I don’t remember why… But I can control them… I also was gifted strength, and speed…” I was talking for awhile when I realized I should probably tell my weaknesses.
“My only two debility’s are my eye sight and… fire…GAH-” I remembered that…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Alpha
“What I meant by ‘at bay’ is keeping it under control, as on keeping it from exploding out in a sudden uncontrollable burst. I’ll explain more later. For now, I believe that masked woman is here to ask us some questions.”
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The Ducktator posted an update 1 month, 1 week ago
I won’t be on KP much the next few days. I’m at a clergy retreat in Georgia right now!
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Alpha
Alpha raised a black eyebrow, studying Rax up and down as if he had never seen him before. He held out his hand and grasped Rax’s wrist.
“We do do something similar to a handshake. I was simply being rude. I apologize.” Alpha bowed his head. “My name is Alpha Grath. So you’re a fire elemental who also can heal, that means you…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
In Realn culture, you grab wrists, I think I showed you that before, so alpha should have accepted Rax’s hand anyways. He was just being purposefully rude for whatever reason.
he’ll probably apologize later…and he’ll also ask about Rax’s power and maybe even share a demonstration of his if Rax can convince…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
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I bowed on my knees this time, “Thank lord, I feel even stronger. and as of my name its-( I̴̛͎̰̳̎͑̔ͅ ̴͓̎͛͘͝N̶͉̖̈̕É̷̼͋Ē̵̱̩͔̗̌̓D̵̤̅͑ ̶̛̱̜͚͌̈́T̸͕͗̌͝O̶̳̔̐́ ̵̜̤̬̞̊̾̕F̴̫̏͊I̷̢̖͚̠͒̿͘G̷͓̜̀͜H̸̦͔̔̊̍͊T̵̹͑̈́͘ ̸͕̬͇̩͆I̴͔͌͑ͅT) It is Fern, all though no one calls me that.” At least I haven’t been called that ever since we used to hang out, now ev…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Astro
Astro looked at Navin, “Nice to meet you Navin, and I hope you don’t use that voice to the authorities… Wait is that how it works here?” Astro looked around, as if he was searching for something. “Where are all the guards?”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @ellette-giselle @koshka
alpha
Alpha stood, still not accepting the man’s hand. “Don’t feel sorry about it. I like throwing knives at people, and since you were making comments about possibly being able to save that man if you were there, I figured you somehow knew him, and were after Silvia too. Speaking of the poor girl,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle
Alpha
“I already called them after the man was killed. It surprises me that they haven’t arrived yet.”
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
???
I walked down the halls of this castle, I was forced away. But I want revenge on the little girl… As I walked I found thees great doors, I went inside and saw a duck headed man sitting on a throne, “Where am I?! WHY AM I HERE?!” I began to…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Sorry my Wi-fi has been acting weird so it took long for me to respond!
Astro
Astro stumbled a little and quickly turned to Navin. “Uh hello? Can I uh help you?” Astro looked down at Navins note book, “Oh… You like books.” Astro seemed a mix of disgust and fear. “Sorry, please don’t report my tone! My name is Astro, and you?”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
Alpha knocked away the guy’s hand. “Firstly, I didn’t murder in cold blood. The man was holding a knife to that little girl’s throat, so I killed him to save her. If I had murdered him, I would have killed Silvia too, then gone looking for my sister and killed her. It is the sad truth that if…[Read more]
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