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@keilah-h

Thanks. I might!

@hybridlore

I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭

Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣

I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.

@keilah-h

If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.

@savannah_grace2009

Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.

@ellette-giselle

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

is it really though??

(this is a joke reply, not a genuine thing you need to spend a paragraph answering and wasting your time lol)

yeah, Leon has a rough time of it, poor guy. I’ve gone back and four on writing his backstory as like a short side story novella. We’ll see though.

I think…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥

@keilah-h

dang that’s dark

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

It seems like they suddenly have a lot more control over the Empire than they appear to.

Uh yeah. They’ve got a pretty strong hold now. Not only are they controlling the Empire’s ruler by fear of the gods, but they’ve got him personally motivated to avenge his cousin and set his kingd…[Read more]

bruh is this roleplay thing still on?

or did it die too?

if it is still there and still accepting characters, I had an absolute blast with Snake when he was in the character party roleplay and would love to dust him off.

@savannah_grace2009

I may have just the thing! Check out my most recently created topic.

@savannah_grace2009 bruhhh that happens though.

I, for one, will be a fan for as long as you’re writing.

@savannah_grace2009 oh my snake’s teeth

I’m so sorry.

praying for ya, that’s super tough

@savannah_grace2009

yo, what’s up???

glad you’re alive lol, how’s the story going?

@ellette-giselle

more like a knitted hat.

ohhh

if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.

dang that’s dark

also it’s gonna be hard to deal with in the next part of the story. Say that against all odds, the new emperor does become a…[Read more]

@keilah-h

perhaps…

more like a knitted hat.

if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.

what do you think of Leon’s backstory?

also the emperor only reigned for 17 years? That’s interesting. How old was he when he started?

@ellette-giselle Chilling climax, if that’s what this is.

“Ah, look at this!” Leon exclaimed, pulling the tray over. “A cup of lovely, musty water, with who knows what floating in it to give us a lovely surprise, and some rock-hard bread seasoned with just enough mold to make it delightfully poisonous.”

lolllll

“And after that we can count the…

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@ellette-giselle

There were from some far-off country— we don’t have knights here.

They, not there.

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

“And then I put it on. There was a helmet that completely covered my face so that no one could ever recognize me or tell…

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@the_lost-journal

In that case, I vote:

Elimination: M

Immunity: 14

@the_lost-journal I made those kinds of mistakes too. I do them a lot less these days cause I have been told off a bunch of times, but I look back on something I texted or posted and I’m like “sheesh that was kinda rude now that I think of it.”