Andrew

@linus-smallprint

Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back

Yes please.

Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?

Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!

@keilah-h

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

Right after the story in the same document

@ellette-giselle

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

It is a neat world, and the artwork is very good (though I wouldn’t recommend looking the artis…[Read more]

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

@keilah-h

Isaiah really does have a wonky moral code, ngl.

I know. But that’s what makes him interesting and why I had to write this down.

I like how the perspective is that of the not-dog, whatever he is. Him getting distracted by the food was hilarious.

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

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Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)

@linus-smallprint

Thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, well at least you made me laugh really hard. 😂

@ellette-giselle

https://drive.proton.me/urls/23F48VDN88#loAxe5eW0Gli

This link should work for you

@ellette-giselle

Your computer:

@keilah-h

Okay. I fixed that. Thank you!

@linus-smallprint

 

Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!

🤣

But it did! Really!

See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”

It…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.

Thank you! She’s entirely finished book one in this series, and the full thing should be in the document.

@esther-c

Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰

@ellette-giselle

I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool.

Okay. Glad to hear that!

Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.

Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!

@linus-smallprint

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]

@grcr

(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)

I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD

@keilah-h

yours are so wacky lol

The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃

Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.

Life be like that sometimes.

@hybridlore

Thanks! Word was what I was having difficulty with. I’m going to see if I’m allowed to have an account there.