Andrew McLaurin

@jonas

Only after this scene?! But Rosemary has gotten NOWHERE! I must add this character AFTER school!

@the_lost-journal

Yep, you can add another. (The current limit is actually 4 at this point btw.)

I was planning on having us add villains shortly after we finish the current “scene.”

@jonas

Hey Jonas, could I add a new character to this? I only have two, and you said the current limit was three. So I was wondering if I could add in a character to develop Rosemary. Her character has gotten nowhere, and besides her acting more of a jerk then usual to Rina, she hasn’t been all that evil.

And speaking of evil, when will villains…[Read more]

@keilah-h

(Come to think of it, if you enjoyed this snippet of my worldbuilding you might enjoy my full on WIP I “borrowed” these characters for, I don’t think I’ve ever shown it to you specifically. It’s a junkpile but it’s at least a semi-coherent story and much cleaner than many works I’ve caught glimpses of in the fandom.)

I’m game! I think…[Read more]

@jonas

Rosemary (Deepwater, Elderstand)

Rosemary saw Rina disappear down a hole that seemingly came from nowhere. She ran towards Fleet, with increasing interest. “What happened? Where did she go!?” Rosemary asked with much curiosity. “I am not sure, she jumped down into this portal thing!” Fleet replied. “Interesting! And does this portal still…[Read more]

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @calyhuge @liberty @keilah-h

The results are in!

Note: I’m listing these in no specific order to give you all my thoughts

Liberty: First of all, I love your style. I think I’ve read one other thing of yours before, but I don’t remember being blown away by the word choice like I was with the first…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

THAT IS INCREDIBLE!!!!!! 🤩 I want one of those in my future house!!!

@the_lost-journal

Rina — Elderstrand, Deepwater, on the ship

Rina panted for breath, dripping water. She was completely soaked after that dive. She glanced up towards the sky, which was now dropping water on them. Maybe it didn’t really matter anyway.

The ship was floating down the river, picking up speed. The soldiers were still chasing afte…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @rae @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge

Ellis — Elderstrand (Group 1)

Ellis suddenly found himself whisked off the ground and deposited onto a nearby roof, along with the rest of the group…except Marcel.

“No way!” Ellis snapped. “We can’t leave anyone behind!”

Just then there was a thud and the rooftop s…[Read more]

Alrighty, I finally finished reading through all of your stories for the first time. I’m gonna read through them again and then give you my thoughts, so hopefully you’ll have the results by this afternoon.

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @jonas @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus sighed. “If he calls for help, I will not hesitate to answer, but you must all go on. He is fighting so you can get a head start running, don’t waste it. I’m staying here to make sure he’s alright.”

@calyhuge

because girls think stuff is gross that guys think is funny

Oh…that honestly makes sense.

I’ll give you my thoughts when I give it to everyone else, but I think you’ll be surprised. I’m a farm girl, I’ve seen some gross things.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr @loopylin @hybridlore @raxforge

Baron(Brutus)—With Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Brutus nodded, even though he knew the strain on him would probably temporarily cripple him.

He lifted Leon from where he lay on the other rooftop first, bringing him back over to their group. He was still out cold, and…[Read more]

@raxforge

I want that soooo bad.

@ellette-giselle

The secret door would look like a wardrobe.

@jonas

I’ve been waiting for someone else in the other group to go so that we can move towards combining those two, but if no one goes soon, I’ll just go myself.

I understand, maybe I should send one of my characters, I have two. So one of them can stay. Plus has the boat left yet? If not then I will make it Jirah, if that is okay of course! (Fo…[Read more]

@calyhuge

I wish this forum wasn’t mostly girls

Uh…okay. Out of the blue but okay. I don’t understand how that relates to your story but okay.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, usually I do.

@the_lost-journal

Your characters and Rina are still on the ship. Sorry that it’s been a while since anything’s happened there. Like I said earlier, I’ve been waiting for someone else in the other group to go so that we can move towards combining those two, but if no one goes soon, I’ll just go myself.

@ellette-giselle

Just copy and paste from the last person’s post, and then delete your name out and add the name of the last person.

Sometimes I forget that you’re relatively new to KP, XD. It feels like you’ve been here as long as I have most of the time.

I might not be a veteran KPer, but most KPer’s who at least were around for Character P…[Read more]