@raxforge
Active 3 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
There was another door ahead; gray, with wooden panels, it was the kind of door that hid along an equally gray wall in a sagging house.
“I want to know why it’s here.” Lucy got up and, after some thought, played a descending scale.
The floor creaked. As Lucy played, the room shifted like a ship at sea, and when she looked at the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel flinched at the loud boom of the piano cover. He cast Lucy a glance, making sure she was okay, before peering inside the piano. “It does have strings.” He hit one of the keys, watching the hammer strike the corresponding string inside the piano, silently fascinated.
Eventually, he dropped his h…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
‘Racist Hospital Workers Let Kid Die.’
😂 I’m dying
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Rory
He held out his hand. “Rory. And I couldn’t leave you.” He cocked his head slightly. “Brother…?” This was the second time someone had claimed him with that familial title. He was beginning to like it.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
@loopylin
Yep, those are the rules I remember -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
Lucy had to choke down a snort. She took the piano lid and pulled. It was heavy but had no hinges. It fell off with a thunderous boom. She scampered back, lost her balance, and sat down suddenly. Dust rose and she let out two sharp sneezes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 5 months, 1 week ago
@rae @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @grcr
Oh cool! I love all of these!!!
MIN!! you have a Tauren too!!!??
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 1 week ago
@rae thank you! My dad said the same so it looks like this is a keeper!
My prose is weird lol. I kept it in my style (sorta like my fanfic) but I also wanted to inject a bit of the style from books I like.
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Ruth's profile was updated 5 months, 1 week ago
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Ruth replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 1 week ago
I read it, and I have to say, it immediately captivated me.
Not only does the Prologue promise us a swash-buckling tale of heroics and battles, but I find the prose rather enjoyable. It definitely has that storyteller feel like Uncle Garth in Secondhand Lions (if anyone gets that movie reference). Maybe not exact, but it reminded me of…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
I probably won’t write anything tonight. I have a bad headache. 🙁
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
When Lucy tried to play the piano, Gabriel relaxed, realizing it was merely an instrument. He pressed a few keys exploratorily, sneezing as the dust traveled under his mask and into his nose. “Is it a magic instrument? Most the ones in my world are ones you have to blow wind through to work, or have s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
BAhaha XD
I think it’s safe to say this is a weird place and there can be weird random objects scattered within. Maybe that says something about the labyrinth masters, not so much the piano itself.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper
I love how Lucy is wondering why there’s a piano in the room, while I’m over here like “It couldn’t be empty, and just a couch or chair is boring, so piano was the first thing I thought of”. Zero deep meaning just a brain who was trying to rp while listening to a streamer talk about a mech video game. -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
“You’ve…” Lucy trailed off, brow furrowing. She clacked her fingers over the keys and tried to play a folk song, but only knew a few seconds of it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
“A piano? This is a piano?”
Gabriel touched it gently, dust flying into the air. He jumped back defensively as an off-tune note rang in the air from the key he pressed.
“Is that normal?” He watched the piano like a curious kitten, not sure if they should attack, ignore, or play with it.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
“Dunno why they’d put a piano in here. I wonder who they are.” Lucy couldn’t tell if they had returned to ground level – after taking the door that led into earth – or if they were in the labyrinth’s basement. The floor had sloped slightly as they walked, sometimes up and sometimes down. Even here, her internal compass was…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
That was lovely. Your descriptions are so pretty, and it’s such a tight piece of short fiction. Hopefully you don’t regret posting it anymore because we appreciated reading it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded. “Good.” He stood, the voices that still had been whispering in his head that day were quiet as he had bound up her arms, but now they returned, a constant noise slowly driving him insane.
Gabriel waved one of his glowing blades ahead. The walls were rough like brick, the floor with l…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 1 week ago
You guys can comment on the doc. If you haven’t seen me update it in a while, badger me into writing more (preferably here rather than there) lol
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