Andrew

@grcr

GIRL! YOU QUOTE!! I loved that part of Freedom’s Fire! That is such a good quote!!

The drawing is amazing too! Mine is sitting on the table waiting to be shaded. I’m gonna try to do it today. YIKES! I hit against the deadline. Rephrase. I am GOING to do it today.

@keilah-h

Ayla

“My name is Crosshair.” growled the man. “And no, I would rather find a way out of here.”

I sighed. Typical boring adult. “Well, maybe we could find a way out while we go on a quest. Like, a secret passage full of deadly traps under a moat! I doubt you could get out even if you tried. It’s a well known fact that you can’t escape…[Read more]

@theshadow

okay, I really like this, but I have one big thing.

the training fight.

so first off, they would use training swords. Wooden ones or maybe blunt mettle. Mistakes happen in training and the less chance for a knight to get killed the better.
second, training is hard on the weapons so their real swords would be set aside for…[Read more]

@theshadow

I’m not great at critiquing, but I did notice one thing.

Eldred Favri, a knight under Lord Damien, was about 21.

Five today… that would make Ninety. Ninety… ninety of his beloved countrymen, women, and even children, dead.

The boy answered, grinning, then, with an air of pride, added, “I’m 7.” “Seven? Well, that certainly is a fine a…

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@whalekeeper

Oh goodness.

Okay, how about…… draw Steve Rogers aka Captain America.It’s the first thing that came to mind and the image killed me.

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

Thanks! Ooo, this sounds great! Oh poor Pax! I will be on his side no matter what. lol.

How many character can I have?

I’ll start with one of my favorites.

Rory is sixteen years old. He’s been trained as a soldier since he was six and would now be a Lieutenant among his own people. He’s slender but strong, has wavy…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

😂😂

@loopylin

They. Have. Met.

Felicity and Lois is a thing guys, you can’t convince me this isn’t a meet-cute, they are a THING. Their ship name is Felois, and oh my goodness Lois does not know how hard he is going to fall for her. It’s perfect.

Also I think this helped me fix my writing block so thank you

🙃

Also also I…

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If I am not mistaken, that is 32 planks. You girls are insane. I bet you made some telepathic decision to write all those words in the same two days, am I right? AMIRIGHT?!?

*Takes a moment to regain composure*

That’s at least a plank every half hour… *Pulls out calculator to schedule my planks for two days* And I WILL do them.

@LOOPYLIN @ELLETTE-GISELLE

@loopylin

Should I make Felicity albino and give her pink eyes, or keep her original silvery eyes? I can’t decide

I like her silver eyes because they make me think of a snowy academia setting, that’s my personal preference. But choose whichever makes you more happy.

Congrats, you’re a expert yapper 🌟

*Pins star on my shirt*

What

It’s a Marcel quo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle You do not have to know all of these things to join, though. I joined without reading any previous parts of the story, and it turned out alright.

@calyhuge thx

@ellette-giselle

So basically you post a description of your charrie/charries, and you get to explore the school with your characters 😀 Just like Keilah described!

We take turns writing interactions between people, and sometimes people have their own groups/factions/whatever. Things can get crazy; we’ve had several bully vs hero…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Well, I could bring my charries back in to show you if you’d like. Basically, you write a short paragraph from your character’s perspective. It could be from first or third person, whichever you like better. Then leave it off for the other person/people to respond with their character(s).

Here, I’ll show…[Read more]

@whalekeeper ooh interesting! I just looked it up and I kinda like the plot. I remember seeing a promo poster for it a long time ago.

@keilah-h

Lol.

So, what do I do?

I feel stupid, but I’ve never done anything like this before. haha

@ellette-giselle I think it’s open! My characters are doing absolutely nothing and are just trying to study in peace or something lol

@ellette-giselle man he does look like Keefe lol

funny enough in the novels he comes from, Keefe also has a photographic memory and is a great artist. Several of the illustrations in the guidebook for his novel series are attributed to him in-universe.

and oof I feel you about the creepy illustrations. The worst I can remember is a depiction of increasingly worse burns in a dictionary of random ailments that I don’t remember where we got it.

@rae Just a few high school ones. My favorite is by a Christian author and is called “Fearfully and Wonderfully Made.” It’s one of the few that I find okay to read at 11 at night lol

It’s an older one though.

Here’s the cover cause I think it’s cool:

Very cautiously peeks into school…..

Is this kinda already fully developed, or can I give it a little try?