Andrew

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Okay, I have decided to continue to keep trying with this.

Hope y’all are still interested. lol.

I still plan to have a scene where Aaron talks to Sabina about courtship, but I haven’t been able to work it out yet, so for now we’re just going on.

Another month was drawing to a close, and still no change had been…

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Phantom of the Opera anyone?

@keilah-h

Rory

Hmm, this could be interesting. 

Rory looked over at Hunter. “So, the winged kids are nice… except then some of them are really mean. That isn’t confusing. Not only do you tell me I need to keep an eye out for winged students, but I have to be able to tell them apart?” He chuckled. “This place s certainly out of my league. So,…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Alright then! I’ll help in as many ways as I can!! Here are the ones I caught in this section.

Oh, btw, Rae’s right. You haven’t posted in WAY to long! We’re all starving for Riker/Leon scenes!

Okay, so there’s no way to highlight on KP that I’ve found, so I’m making my edits bold. I’m afraid you’ll have to look kinda…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

#HugLeonAndRikerSquad

I’m so happy to see them again!!! You haven’t been posting in too long!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

I think I’m the only one in line. And I don’t have a drawing of mine either.

@freed_and_redeemed

Honestly Freedom, the “To be warned” headings you add about tickle me pink at this point. If any keepers reading your writing don’t already know they’re in for a punch to the gut, they sure haven’t been around here very long. XD

Good job, and keep up the good work!

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVED  it this was so so good freedom!!!

I caught quite a few grammatical errors and typos but I’m guessing you’re not done editing. If you want me to go back and mark them I can.

other then that, amazing job!! I CANNOT WAIT for the next book!!

@mineralizedwritings

k, I finished up mine.

@freed_and_redeemed

of course you can ask for a character!! You’ll just have to see who all’s in line. 😉

@linus-smallprint

By the way do you remember mentioning that you had a friend who tried to make an account but couldn’t end up getting on here? The same thing happened to me, and after waiting around for two months, I finally conta…[Read more]

Not sure what’s going on around here, since I last ventured through these halls. I’ll get around to reading through this some day. That said…

@loopylin Don’t feel any pressure to respond. I just sort of remembered I had these guys in here.

Leo

Long streaks of rust ran down the concrete walls, a reminder that nobody came down here until it was…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’ll have you know that I just wrote…

*Counts*

0 words in any of my WIPs. That’s right, zero.

Go eat a cookie. Or ice cream. All those planks deserve it.

As for me, I have a homework dragon to slay.

@theshadow @whalekeeper

What are they wearing?

XD

Tenz and Reid

Reid pushed the door open, seeing three people on the other side, two men and one woman. The men seemed to be preparing to fight with primitive weapons until Reid had opened the door. Looking at them, his mind immediately jumped to a picture of Ancient Wond that his father had lying…[Read more]

@theducktator also yes, killing off characters=very relatable.

Me, I usually end up mutilating characters. One loses an arm here, another gets blinded there, still another gets their face scarred over there…..Nothing TOO bad, but yeah, my guys (and girls sometimes) get beat up.

@rae lol yeah, I probably should be glad of that haha

@keilah-h

Thanks! I’ll look into it

Wait, burns are the worst you’ve seen…lucky

@theducktator

 I’ve killed several myself.

XD so relatable

@ellette-giselle

Hunter

So Rory had military training! Interesting. Maybe Hunter could introduce him to Echo or Rex.

“From all the schools I’ve ever come from there’s always been a hierarchy among the students. There seem to be the privileged fellows who get away with anything, the targets, the guys just trying to study, and the rebels. I’ve…[Read more]