Andrew

@linus-smallprint

Okay! I will try to have a description by tonight.

@esther-c

You’re welcome! I love children’s writing, and am thrilled to see someone else here on KP showing interest. Most writers here, if you’ve noticed, write either romance or YA. Not that those aren’t genres that desperately need good books, they’re just not where my passion lies. *Shrug*

@esther-c

There are many books that impacted me as a kid, but I’m just going to say Freddy the Pig. They are my comfort books now, and I’ve loved them since I was 6. There’s always at least 3 plot lines going on, and the characters are hilarious and full of personality. They also tie in a lot of what were then current events, like in one, the a…[Read more]

@esther-c

If you don’t want the mom dead, maybe she lost her mind and was shut in an asylum? (Sort of like the Longbottoms in Harry Potter). Or she was abducted?

@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I changed my mind. There is one more scene I want to write before The Rebel. Chapter the 17th is now The Role Model.

With this chapter, I have now reached 50,000 words! Whew!

Question for you all. While this series is primarily directed towards believers, I want un…[Read more]

@loopylin

Okay!

@ellette-giselle

*goes back in corner to sulk because not only did the bomb not explode in your face but you picked up the wrong one altogether*

I’m sorry. I have a too-healthy sense of self-preservation to pick up explosive things. I guess I really did go after the fish instead of the shoes. (Next time don’t tell me there is supposed to be a big…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

*goes in corner and sulks*

comes back out again.

But that’s the WRONG bombshell!!! I meant about Aaron being able to get out and him leaving them all!! Not the wall. The wall affects the fact that no one is coming to rescue them now. If there was anyone coming.
should I still have them trying to escape?

btw, do you think A…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I think something is keeping this plot twist from being effective. As far as I can remember, there has been no talk from any of their characters about fleeing from the land. You’ve already told us that the characters were trapped in the city for over a year. I was under the impression that they had accepted this fate and all…[Read more]

@loopylin

He can join the Society and then someone will have to show him the light, because we can’t have an evil Dante at the end of the day.

@loopylin nice, that sounds kinda like a warrior cats name haha

but yeah, I haven’t come up with anything cool for my pairings yet either XD

@grcr

Congratulations on your third win!

@mineralizedwritings

Jonathan’s clothing looks more professional than what I picked up from his description. I imagined him dressed casually in a tee-shirt.

@theductator

A request for when you submit your description. When I created this challenge, I intended it to help authors develop their ability to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin About ship names….

Recently I’ve found there’s another way of titling ships. Rather than just combining the characters’ names, you can use one or two words that have an aspect of both their personalities or are related to them or their character arcs. This helps if the names combine into something really weird, or just…[Read more]

@theshadow you’re welcome! I didn’t see your post until now because KP is apparently wigging out and won’t send me emails to any of your latest posts for some reason.