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@theducktator

Thanks!

I should have it posted soon. I only have some shading (if i even decide to because she looks pretty perfect rn as she is) and a few details on her clothes left.

@grcr Ohh, interesting! That sounds like a really cool idea.

@elishavet-pidyon

ahhhh!!!! This is amazing!!!! 🤩

@loopylin @ellette-giselle whoa both of your drawings are awesome!!!

and heyyyy Loopy you have a YouTube channel??? So do I! I don’t have any art on it yet, just a few Blender animations.

@grcr more characters from the same novel? Or a different one?

also I love your shading.

@stephie oh my goodness that’s hilarious.

I like picking up random French phrases because I have a character who’s from that country, so……

@ellette-giselle I think I remember you posting part of his story in one of the chats…it was so sad!! I hope he gets a good ending.

@freed_and_redeemed @sunny421 @loopylin

Fixed your tags…

*waits anxiously in the shadows*

@elishavet-pidyon

Where? Where are the opening scenes?

@linus-smallprint

I get the feeling that a lot of eldests are writers. In fact, I’ve only met one girl who was a writer and wasn’t an oldest sibling.

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h

Here’s the next section.

In the following days, Aaron let go of all hopes of returning home. He accepted the reality that this was his new home, and would be a place he would never leave. He committed his father and sister to the Lord, trusting Him to watch over and protect them.

It was hard, but Aaron…

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@linus-smallprint

Would you have been angry with him if he did leave her? lol.

I almost wrote a fake scene where he did, just to see how you would react. But I didn’t have time. XD

Hmm, I’ll think about that. I think that Aaron always had it in the back of his mind that this is temperary and he will go home. Only, now he can’t.

Did it not…[Read more]

What’s it with all these readers being eldest siblings? I should go check again with my siblings to see what they think of Martha. (My brother will probably try to tell me his suffering as the youngest is much worse, but whatever. I could maybe show some of his frustrations in Eric, even if Eric is not the youngest.)

@theducktator

Thanks! Got it!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, I was right. Aaron did not leave Sabina (good lad). If you want it to be harder for the reader to see what is coming, Aaron will need to miss his family more and long to return to his homeland earlier on.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @rae @mineralizedwritings @anyone-I-missed

Deadline! ⬆️⬆️

@theducktator

Oh yeah! Tyn does not like doing dishes, so Alan could be her hero, cleaning up after she finishes cooking something.

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

did the tags not work?

hmmm, technology……

@grcr

Oh, right. Deadlines. Do you think Sunday the 22nd is enough time?