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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
question: what do you think of the Seven year jump forward ending?
Hmm, I don’t mind it. It’s a little strange if your second book is going to pick up right where this one left off, but that’s not a bad thing.
were you sad Aaron died?
Yes, but oddly enough, when a God-fearing character dies in a story, I’m not usually as sad as I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@esther-c Bruhhh that’s so random
but it’s cool!
I’ve been to Italy and it’s amazing.
The north and the south regions of the country basically consider themselves two different cultures, haha. I’ve only been to the south. The people there were generally nice.
I’ll have to ask my mom about this, she remembers more than me haha
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Yep sort of. I meant guys dressing as girls, or vise versa. So yeah. It’s gross and called some pretty strong names in the Bible.
XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
In case anyone’s concerned, I was discussing writing when I said the above quote.I come bearing quotes.
“I identify as supercalifragilisticexpialidocious.”-kid at co-op
Little sister: *holds up word card* “What does this say?”
Mom: “Grape”
Little sister: “Like Alexander the Grape?”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@theducktator ok thanks!!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
I think the last RP was page 448?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@theducktator ahhh forgot!!
where were we?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@koshka yeah she’s crazy lol
and yeah I don’t like crossdressing either, if by crossdressing you mean guys in skirts or girls in tuxes or something like that. Eeeyagh, just thinking about what that’d look like is making me cringe.
I mean, I hate wearing dresses or skirts and would rather have a (modest) pair of pants, but I’m sure that’s not…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed very good points!
also yeah braces stink from what I’ve heard. I’m glad I got the plastic things instead of the metal wires, but I know a lot of people who need braces can’t get those cause they only work for certain conditions. And I still had to get a few little metal anchors in my mouth for rubber bands to attach to, and…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
I think it’s your turn to RP in here?
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Oh gracious. I remember braces. I drank a lot of soup/broth, and yogurt. Anything that didn’t require teeth.
I don’t have anything to add to that so- *nods* Well put.
Also, Leon you poor baby. I’ll always care for you even if you are as mixed up as a crushed bag of tortilla chips. *Offers a mug of tea and cookies*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
Yup, you can delete Reedsy links and even add expiry dates to them! It is free as well. I recommend you read through their terms and conditions first though, just to double-check that they do not claim any rights to the books you put on there. (Something I’ve been meaning to do myself.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
I dunno. I just don’t really have any accounts.
Can you delete the Reedsy link? Is it free?
Yup. I do want to think about things before I answer, so I will be taking some time. I also will need to make School assignments, preparing a Sunday School lesson, and work a priority. If I have time, I may start going through…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
I kinda don’t mind that you know all of that from that little end part. But would you as a reader rather not know it?
If you don’t mind, leave it. Depending on when you publish it, you can go back and change this later.
AWESOME!! You’ll have to introduce her to me when/if she does. That has to be soooo fun having a sibling who als…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
I kinda don’t mind that you know all of that from that little end part. But would you as a reader rather not know it?
She may eventually join KP.
AWESOME!! You’ll have to introduce her to me when/if she does. That has to be soooo fun having a sibling who also writes!
Firstly, do you have a Google or Microsoft account?
Uh,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed oooh I loved his character in the book! I’ll be participating in this one!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
Also, I probably will not be participating in this challenge again. I’m too busy with other things.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed
Yes, the idea is to do a character no one has seen before. Not just to avoid giving an unfair advantage to some contestants. This challenge is also an experiment to see how people imagine your characters without seeing any illustrations of them and is meant to help you improve how you describe character’s…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
Woah. Lotsa questions. (I completely understand though. Your gonna get lotsa questions whin I finish my current draft of The Cost)
Is that a bad thing? Do you feel like it spoils too much? What can you tell me is definitely going to happen from that scene. (Just so I can gage how much it actually does give away)Â
Darrien is…[Read more]
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