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@liberty

wow. Thanks you!

No I thought you’re was so good, and after that ending I had literal chills and I was like, “oh, that’s the one!”

@liberty

Really!? You thought i was going to win?! I thought you or elshavit would!

Okay, I’ll give a longer deadline.

I’m currently pushing to finish a chapter in a book I’m writing, but I’ll think of one after that.

@power

Actually, they have never put me in a headlock or threatened to put something nasty on me. (though they have done such things to one another.) They have poked me or kicked me under the table, but nothing horrid like you were suggesting. They are gentlemen in the highest regard. Mom and Dad taught them that. They said they are not allowed…[Read more]

@koshka

Well of course I’m reading it. XD

I wasn’t sure. I’m so happy though! I’ll tag you from now on.

You know if it is a threat that’s practically a dare for me to do bad things to him. lol.

(Good thing for you this is the 3rd draft and I’m not changing major plot points.)

@power

Yes! and I feel really bad for them!!!!

My brothers are never so mean. At least, not to us girls. They do terrible things to each other though, but around us they are true protective knights.

@ellette-giselle

Well of course I’m reading it. XD

Ooooffffff I knowwwww. Hurting the poor babies hurts us too…

A threat?

…

Hmmm…

@elishavet-pidyon

Thanks! I’ll count you in!

@power

You are so depraved!!!

@ellette-giselle

I think you can go ahead and give the prompt whenever you want.

And I vote for one word. It makes things so much more interesting in my opinion.

@koshka

oh my goodness! Thank you! I had no idea you were reading this! It makes me so happy!!!

Okay, I will keep those things in mind. Thank you!

I know, poor Joseph. I had no problem doing things to Aaron and even killing him before he could marry Sabina, but doing this to a little ten-year-old is kinda tough. lol.

@liberty

Wow! That’s really cool about y’all’s family!!!

@rae

Wait! Really!!!!!?? Oh how cool! Thank you so much! WOW!!! Yippy!

@raxforge @elishavet-pidyon @calyhuge @liberty @keilah-h

The rest of y’all did an amazing job, and I LOVED reading your stories! Glad I don’t have to be the judge.

Oh wait.

I do.

LOLOLOLOL.

I can’t wait, but it’s gonna be hard!!!

Okay. How long of a brake…[Read more]

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @calyhuge @liberty @keilah-h

The results are in!

Note: I’m listing these in no specific order to give you all my thoughts

Liberty: First of all, I love your style. I think I’ve read one other thing of yours before, but I don’t remember being blown away by the word choice like I was with the first…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay! I finally got to read through this so far. Here’s my thoughts:

1) Joseph is a dear little boy who might need to be protected from his author.

2) You tend to rely a little heavily on Telling over Showing. For instance, you saying he is struggling with nightmares is unnecessary, since I can see that well enough from his POV…[Read more]

@theducktator

I know!!!!! It’s so awesome!!!!

@ellette-giselle

THAT IS INCREDIBLE!!!!!! 🤩 I want one of those in my future house!!!

@keilah-h

I know right!!! It’s one of the things on my dream house Pin board.

@ellette-giselle wowwwwww

That is so cool!!

My dad designs houses, so if I ever want him to make me a house, I’m gonna ask him to put one in there.

@ellette-giselle

Yep.

Wait a minute.

@koshka

Who are your Clans? Do you know?