Andrew

@esther-c ohhh so that’s why they haven’t sent an email to my brother so he can join!!

that’s kinda sad, does that mean he’ll never be able to get on?

@esther-c @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, I’ve noticed things are slowing down. 😔 The best way I can think of picking things up again would be to update the articles, add new material.

Does anyone remember the time they added a page for a new rank of KP writers? Anyone who wrote three of either articles, short stories, or poems? It was there one…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever.

I liked the sense of friendship I got from all the good guys, even if they couldn’t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good.

Whoa! Interrogate is a strong word!

lol

Okay, well i don’t like him very much. he seems weak and kinda sulky. I mean. I don’t know, he’s a coward, and I don’t like cowards. I feel a redemption arch, but at the moment it’s hard to see. So yeah, I’m hoping for redemption, but I’m not liking him right now.

@linus-smallprint

I had no idea what that picture was from. i just saw the meme the other day and thought of it. It was perfect.

Sounds like you are speaking form experience here

Let’s just say, a long time ago, the last fight I had with my brother ended when mom duct taped our wrists together.

For the whole day.

We had to do school t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

By the way, you keep on interrogating me about Leon. So I want to interrogate you on Eric. What do you think about him now? Where do you think things are going to go for him?

@ellette-giselle

I guess it would not be beyond Tyn to try to break off from the other soldiers and see if she can contribute more. I’ll see what I can do with that. Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

Just watching Avatar the Last Airbender for the first time with my sibling in. 12 Chapters into Book 1 right now. Prince Zuko and his uncle have been my favourite characters so far.

Lol. It’s very affective. Trust me…………..

Sounds like you are speaking form experience here.

well I want Joseph to have SOME faith. Plus, its easy…

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@linus-smallprint

Ooo, that chapter was very well written. I was feeling very tense, even though I knew what was going to happen. lol.

Yeah, Tyn is in a good position. Have her do it. This will be so, so bad for Eric. Plus, Tyn is in a bad mood, so she may even scold him.

I have never met a guy that didn’t absolutely hate it when a girl scolded him.

@ellette-giselle

Here is the unfinished chapter. (Anyone else who want to read it and/or help me out can as well)

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/n8oETFK

@ellette-giselle

Give me five minutes please, and I will try to post what I have written so far so that you will have the context you need. Warning, there may be more inconcitecies/grammer mistakes in here than usual. And this is going to be a long chapter. (I might split it into two for my third draft.)

(Oh, you know what would really smart? Is…

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@linus-smallprint

Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)

um…. because it was obvious since Martha got captured that he was a liability, and by the chapter you just wrote I knew he was going to get caught or alert the soldiers or something. (I may overstudy literary patterns.)

Sooo, maybe I’m blind, but I’m not seeing the problem……….. w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

It occurs to me that Sabina and Julian are similar. Both have a brother who became a Christian, and they both thought he had gone crazy, which made them resistant to hearing the gospel and angry at whoever shared it with their brother. So I’m wondering if Sabina is going to recall how she acted and how this may impact her i…

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@keilah-h

plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.

I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Yup. That fits. I think I deserved that.

@ellette-giselle

If you could share a bit more detail I might have an easier time coming up with ideas.

Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)

Eric was hiding by the blockade, where he was waiting for any of the rescued Faithful to show up. However, he made the mistake of hiding to close and was spotted when some soldiers dismounted to see if they…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Its, its… BEAUTIFUL!!! 😭😭😭😭 I am crying TEARS of JOY!

Thank you.

Is the magic potato going to answer my poorly poetic question, or am I going to just have to trust it has good intentions?

@ellette-giselle

There was a little box holding the ring that had been his mother’s. Her favorite shawl was folded beside his father’s hunting knife. His very own Bible lay with the treasures, and beside it were several shiny stone from the creek that flowed through his father’s farm. Joseph leaned forward and set the papers gently back into the b…

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@ellette-giselle

Forgot your tag on the previous post