Andrew

@theshadow nah it’s fine! I can get these kinds of things done pretty fast anyway. It’s the initial draft that takes all the time, and I’m just about done with that.

@theshadow ok! lol

@theshadow I’d need to read through it again to pick up clues on who to kick out.

@theshadow you’re welcome!

I wanted it finished by Christmas, and it seems like the actual story itself will be, but I’ll only be able to type it up and get it to you afterward. Hopefully before the new year though!

@linus-smallprint Merry Christmas!

Do the races of Ehverwyld have a Christmas equivalent?

@liberty

I haven’t actually participated in any of these yet, so don’t worry about me too much. But I am more likely to participate in this if it runs in the new year to keep writing while I take a break between drafts.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Next chapter.

Chapter the 33rd – The Father

I’ll see you after Christmas with the final chapter! Merry Christmas to you all!

@savannah_grace2009 that’s cool!!

And hey, redrafting can be fun, reading through your story and thinking “oh, I gotta change that” or “what if I switch around these two scenes? It might flow better that way” or “let me change up this character’s role…..”

Except if you do too much. I read a comic recently that had 27 drafts before its final…[Read more]

@grcr you’re welcome!

@mineralizedwritings I exist to rant too lol

@theshadow Not me regretting I didn’t put a character in, cause this looks super fun lol

I vote Z, although X sounds fun too

@savannah_grace2009 I love this one too! I’m assuming the story, or at least the beginning, has changed a lot from previous drafts. It’s going in a good direction!

I vote A, Q, and Y

@theshadow It was honestly better than I expected, good enough to keep!

I would’ve only changed the ending if like a bunch of them died in the end or something, which didn’t happen.

haha you’re good, no reason to worry

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings

I would shop more if I didn’t have sTinKiN’ [insert bad words here] dissociative episodes in the middle of a clothes-rack. People walk down the aisle and all they see are these eyes: O.O

ridiculous impulse buys are the best

This is true. I once bought a green dress without thinking about it, unlike all my other…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ha, that’s what I thought.

I can’t believe I added this in the RP like 50+ pages ago. XD Felt like it would come in use for something. There are a lot of people who need to pet a puppy.

Seb

Seb cocked his head at Eddie’s comment, but didn’t say anything about it. “Maybe. He was on my bed in the dorm.”

He watched them fondle the…[Read more]

@loopylin

I didn’t forget about the Twins! I told you I wouldn’t forget! My character still owes detention duty.

Seb

There was a small cough. The twins turned around to find Sebastian in the kitchen doorway.

He looked down at his baggy shirt, then slowly raised a hand. “Hi. I took a nap. …Sorry for coming late.”

The girls nodded. Eddie held…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Has black curls(cropped short so it’s just very tumbly hair), black/brown eyes, and a lighter olive complexion. Is about average height for a 16 year old and on the thin side.

Ah… handsome boy. Whaley likey. 😏

@ellette-giselle

…So you’re interested in making it to the school to make dance arrangements? I was under the i…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin

The way a person shops actually tells you so much about them

@mineralizedwritings
Yeah I noticed! It’s a hard balance between trying to keep up someone’s spirits and trying to erase the problem with positivity. I bet Tauren just hasn’t had enough time to think about what qualifies as one intent or the other.

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you for the useful and fun rant. XD I appreciate it.

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

Thank you! I wanted a Tim Burton kind of look, and I think it looks similar.

@grcr

Ah, I like the expression and pose, especially with the clothing folds to sell the pose.

@elishavet-pidyon

The floatiness of her hair is fantastic. :]