Andrew

@stephie

Eek I ranted sorry.

No worries. I rant all the time, just ask @ellette-giselle.

Thank you both for your feedback on the emotional scene. Heh heh. Maybe one day I will learn how to make my characters emotional, but your advice will help me, thanks for it. Where would the both of you say the emotion fell off in the chapter? Was it around…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Do the races of Ehverwyld have a Christmas equivalent?

Possibly? The only holiday I have figured out for Klaw is Arsakora Day, which is a lyenized kentor holiday in spring to celebrate trees. (It was talked about in Chapter the 12th – The Memory). I know they have some winter holiday, but it could be very similar or very different to our…[Read more]

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Here’s the movie balled. Oh the music! It was amazing!!!

This is a story I can stand behind concerning women fighting. She fought when she was defending women and…[Read more]

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HAS ANYONE SEEN THIS!!!!!????

It was amazing!!!! I saw it in theaters with friends and am now trying to scrape together the money to take my family! It was AMAZIN…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings    @grcr

My initial reaction when I open KP and people have changed their profile pics and now I can’t figure out who on earth this person is and why they are tagging me.

@linus-smallprint

Merry Christmas!!!

Oh I saw that coming! This is good, Linus. I do have one complaint.

 

This is an emotional moment, but I don’t see much emotion in Alan’s prayer.

I would suggest pausing in between fragments of prayer and describing what Alan is doing and feeling in that moment.

Exactly. This was just what I was thi…[Read more]

@loopylin

I love that all three of them need stools to reach the counter XD

Plus, they’re expected to get so much done all by themselves, in comparison with all the cafeteria workers. XD

Seb

“Ha, nice. I used to have a white rat when I was five… Or was it a kitten? I could hold it in my hand.” Seb pulled a hand out of the sink and studied…[Read more]

@raxforge

*Takes in a deep breath to explain the game if needed* XD I listen to some of the books over Christmas.

Okay, lol. It’s more of a whole-school-throws-a-party than a dance. I think more than half of the characters are going with friends or by themselves.

@liberty

yes!!! Yes it is!! The profile is Cora and the banner is the cover!!

have you read it!?!?

@liberty

oh me too! I love the redemption characters!!

wait! Rolf Klaus!! Not Rolf Klaus from The Baker Family Adventures?!?!

oh yes, I have often thought of that. I find so many aspects of writing a small reflection of God and us.

@whalekeeper

oh I was mostly teasing. Lol. 😂

I would never be comfortable in a place like that from what it sounds like, but Rory might go just because he has no idea what is going on and what a dance even is. lol.

we’ll see if he ends up peeking in there.

@whalekeeper I mean yeah it is pretty cool lol

@keilah-h

a wild flying car, yikes haha

I always wanted to own that car XD

@whalekeeper oh ok!

basing it off a bird makes sense too

a wild flying car, yikes haha

@whalekeeper lolllll