Andrew

@whalekeeper

Thank you very much for your feedback. It was helpful. I think I now have a clearer picture of what I need to work on.

@whalekeeper

Love Tyn. …like Eric, too.

Glad to hear it. These two were the least liked by my readers in the first draft. Tyn is pretty much the same. I think she is just a love-or-hate character. Eric was a disaster, and I almost removed him from the story altogether before I decided to change his role and personality because I realized he…[Read more]

@liberty

But I can’t continue until I figure out exactly what fictional ingredients two of my characters like on their sandwiches.😫

@linus-smallprint

Oh I thought it was fine. It seems like a foretelling that she’s going to become a key character later on. As long as that’s true, I say keep it.

You’re welcome for the feedback!

@ellette-giselle

Don’t have to much to ask you, but:

Martha. Especially some Alan/Martha moments. *blink blink blink. Blinkity-blink blink* lol.

I would still like to know what your thoughts were on switching to Martha in that second-last chapter.

Just that this was a great book and one that I would totally buy. Well done! Keep me in the loop if…

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@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

I do have some questions/comments to your overall feedback. I will start with Ellette since she posted first.

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I didn’t realize you had replied to this before I logged off yesterday. Thank you for your thoughts as well. I was talking to my dad about the issue and he had similar thoughts.

@stephie

On the other hand, it’s magic. It’s directly contradictory to everything Christians stand for. The Fall of man happened because humans didn’…

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@whalekeeper

HA! I got a majority of those!!

@koshka

Ha!!! That is so good! That is just perfect! Yup, that’s how his brain works. Barnes is a little to close to the life Rory knows. He doesn’t know what to do with Leo, so he’s wound up trusting him.

@loopylin

Woah, you used my real name. XD I guess this must be serious. (You’re okay, you can call me Hannah whenever you want to.)

@loopylin

If you need a bit of time away from people during the holidays, it’s okay to pull out your art for a while. Don’t feel guilty about it, everyone needs to recharge once in a while. Now go eat <3

*nods*

@loopylin

Ooo, smooores…

Eek! XD I’ve do that way too much. I just get busy, or start reading a book and WhOoPs! There goes the day. You?

@loopylin

GO GET FOOD FROM YOUR FRIdGE. NOW.

@whalekeeper

Pizza? Hmm.

*Slinks away to look for some kind of recipe or frozen pizza that’s small enough*

@loopylin

Do the holidays make you a little sad? …I’ve heard that’s pretty common.

@koshka

You NEED to make PIZzA. Little mini pizza. Tasty. Nom nom. (This is imperative,)

My parents just brought home a toaster oven for me. I am so thrilled right now it’s kind of ridiculous.

@whalekeeper

It is. I mean, you get to try to hit people with swords. And you learn all these foot movements that have names in French or Latin.

Thanks!

@loopylin

*Passes you a veggie ramen bowl* Good, good. U?

@rae @loopylin

Lore songs because I have them, and I like how vague they are because no one can accuse me of anything.

For Marcel – Death With Dignity by Sufjan Stevens

And Marcel’s nameless ‘friend’ – A Different Kind of Human by Aurora